All Comments on 'The Sharp Edge of the Veil Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Screaming

Everyone (thing) Screamed, I literally laughed till i cried for a good 10 minsXQ9BYx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is hilariously funny, and mostly really well written. Perhaps a bit quick over what happened that made the gangster boyfriend show up? It felt very rushed.

Also fun to read a story set in my neck of the woods!

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