All Comments on 'The She-Wolf's Human Mate'

more femdom bullshit not wroth reading

I love strong girls.

Kind of a dirty YA story. Not bad

Nice story. Is it only one chapter? I was convinced this Cassandra woman was going to show up.

Nice story and very enjoyable. I had on issue and the was you going from Jake to the man and Amanda to the women, just made it weird.

You definitely need a proof reader. There were numerous mistakes throughout this story and a few were confusing enough to cause me to reread the sentence(s) several times in order to figure out what you wanted to say. There were several times when the tone became sophomoric like this was being written by a 15 year old.

Overall, I liked it. But I can only give you a 3/5 because of the silly mistakes.

Plenty of room for follow up

Great story, but it really deserves more chapters. What about Cassandra? How does she affect Jake? lots of storylines to explore! Thanks for the entertainment!

[28.07.22]

Very Kawaii und Romantique!

Good gentle FemDom action.

11/10!!!!!