All Comments on 'The Shepherd's Crook Pt. 04'

Please! We need more Ben Shepherd!

Really love this series..can't wait for another submission.

I can not wait for Part 5.

Insufferable disaster this last submission following the failure in the later portion of the last submission. Ended up being a major joke. Enjoyed the first 3 and half substories and then these last two submissions are so far fetched with ridiculous off the chart crap the dude had to be on some type of drugs,

To Anony Mouse who commented 'Insufferable Disaster.....'.

This is yet another fantastic chapter in an amazing story. This fits in with the rest of the story line perfectly.

The next chapter or possibly two chapters are going to be absolutely fantastic. Even id the writer has any life issues and asks for help from other top flight writers on Lit.

More...there HAS to be more.....please

Another amazing story by a very talented writer, can't wait for the next chapter. Love all your work, Originally started with Jacks adventures and off world escapades, Then Ed Walters story. It was great as well. Seeing Ed in this story was a more than welcome surprise. I hop you plan on getting all of the two families together for a visit, seems like a great idea. Can't wait for more

Great story hope to be able to read more very soon.

Who does Ben love most? The pat answer is that he loves all his harem equally. That's nonsense. I have seen parents give the same answer in regards to their children when their favoritism was blatant. Having read and re-read the stories, I would say that Tina, Trish, Cat, and Gabriella are his favorites - perhaps Gabriella most of all. However, I would like to assume that perhaps Tina and Lucy are his favorites as he lives with them, and they have his children. Who loves him most? Gabriella loves her business. Cat loves her lesbian lover most; she lives with her. Trish...? Tina and Lucy are both committed to him, sharing his house and usually his bed - although they are lesbian lovers too.

Just read it for a second time, looking forward to the next chapter. I am however, still struggling with the loss of Tatiana, as it seems glaringly out of character.

We need Robin to sneak into the publishing house and clear their servers. Actually, Zama needs to learn top level dark web kinda hacking.

Richard got off easy, that brass needs a sledgehammer but I guess the fire ax took the rage.

My favorite chapter of Ben!!!!

Ohhhh. My favorite hung boys finally got together, love it. You have an amazing mind, thank you for sharing it with us!!!!

Ah man. I guess I finished the Shepherd's roller coaster. Greatly enjoyed all 4 'books' for lack of a better term. Though I feel Shepherd's Crook has a chapter or 2 left in it. Looking forward to the next installment.

I sure hope this is not the end of Ben Shepard stories you have created a great story and have left many questions to answer. The foundation, the hook, the lives of eachbif his woman and I hope to ready more stories including Ed as his stories left other questions as well. I love how you brought the two stories together. More please

I thought they were All great stories.. not a fan of a lot of the sex. But it Was a needed part of these storysLike others.. I only hope some time soon . You continue with the exploits of Ben and his family.. YOU DO GOOD WRK. THERES NO DOUBT ABOUT THAT. and THANK YOU FOR THE STORYS ALRDY HERE 👍👍😉😁🤷👁️👁️hope to be hearing from you soon.. but if not.. then thks from all of us fans

Great stories all through the series, but the last couple of books it morphed from a telling of polyamorus relationships into a international spy thriller. It fells like it got away from its roots.... Again, the writing is wonderful but the scope of the action strayed along way from Ashburn Court.

Okay, a great read - all the way through - but, incomplete?! Ya can't drop me off the cliff and leave me hanging!!! Please?! Thank you.

These characters are my absolute favourite characters of all times on this website. Please, please, please continue their story!

Yeah the story is still awesome. Still waiting for the next part!!!! Please please please tell me more is coming.

Other stories will keep losing their scores until this is the number one ranked story again.

Fun stories, and finally got drunk temper and growly rescuer in the same story. Looking forward to ch 5, but having more Jack's Working Alien Coitus chapters is a tradeoff I will take.

As with nearly evrry good book I read after I finish I want to read it again. Just finished my 10th time reading through the series. It never seems to get old to me.

Looking forward to A Shepard goes to Washington hope we don't have to wait much longer.

Loved it, but when will we see Part 5?

seems, you have alot of stories to finish , ive given all a 5 so far, and look forward to seeing your best continue.

Without a doubt the best Author at Literotica. Second to none! My third time reading and I'd love to give this story 10 deserving stars but will have to settle for 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUBE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

LOVED the whole series. When are you going to write part 5? PLEASE say there will be a part 5 ! Would have given more stars but they max out at 5 😠

After reading Jack's latest, I went back and reread all of Ben. All very enjoyable.

Part 5?

Please?

I enjoyed the Ben Shepard series

I am retired military, and was a bit bothered by "Fort Kortridge Air Base", in my time it would have been either Fort Kortridge (Army), or Kortridge Air Base (Air Force), ... but over the past few decades, since I retired, there have been a number of changes to combined bases, so why not your fantasy facility, ...

-- Perhaps Ben Shepherd lives in an Alternate Universe from ours, and maybe the Air Force never split from the Old Army Air Corps, back in 1947, but remained combined, ... You might need to change Ben's Military Liaison officer, Captain David (?)'s branch of service from Air Force to Army Air Corp, ... but that's a quick fix, ... that would explain Evelyn's funny chain of command working directly under an 'Air Force' officer, with him reporting to Sgt Killkade's uncle, the Army General, ... having it all Army does work out better, ...

-- it was an enjoyable installment. (Five stars of course) but I hate that I must now wait many months for the next part, .... oh well, it is worth it, ... ;-) ttfn

Looking forward yo future installments. I hope you are well.

More please!!!!!

A brilliant story that I keep rereading desperately hoping you continue this as it's the best I've read in many years (that's a lot of years). Thanks for writing this.

Just finished my second read-through of the Ben Shepherd series. As much fun as the first read-through. Although I'm kind of bummed you left us with a cliffhanger ;-) We need moar!

Great story! Can't wait for the next installment!

I agree I’m hoping the 4th installment comes out soon as I have every story from Amazon and love them

This is, by far, one of my favorite series. I just finished reading it for the second time. You’ve chosen an interesting spot to leave it, however, I wonder if continuation might be forthcoming. I feel resolution, regarding the book, is warranted. It would be fitting if it highlighted him as he wishes to be seen, rather than how others have portrayed him.

Very well done.

Hopefully soon you will finish this story line. It will be interesting to see what next you have in store for Ben and his Family

At the head of this story (part 4), you said it has 5 parts. Where is part 5?

Can’t wait to see part five. So many different back stories and vignettes. So looking forward to the next part.

Fantastic series so far. Like several of your others. Thank you. Hope your muse stays with you and flourishes.

When is part 5 a silable?

Really like the whole Ben Shepherd series. Please write more soon.

You're storys are great please continue. I keep rereading them especially your Shepherd story's.

Loved the series and I look forward to Shepherd’s Crook 5

Robin's book! ... The Shepherd's Crook part 5, .... and part 4 was in 2022, we need more Ben Shepherd, ...soon, ... this was a wonderful installment, ... looking forward to more, ... thank you for sharing your writing talent and your amazing imagination, good job! ;-) ttfn

This series deserves an ending.

1. If he is important enough to divert an aircraft carrier, he is important enough to retask a spy satellite.

2. This isn’t 1942 when pilots relied on the mk 1 eyeball. Carriers put out flying radar. That would have revealed the yacht well before pilot recognition.

I keep rereading this saga please keep it going I and my friends are getting withdrawal symptoms.

"Hell hath no fury as a scorned woman"...

No greater sacrifice than oneself for her friends (or her enemies).

No good deed goes unpunished?

Such a great series! Love all of it. How much longer will you make us wait for Shepherd's Crook Pt. 05?

loved the series so far please keep it going.

This entire series and your other stories are great entertainment.

I have read many of them more than once.

I am looking forward to the next chapters with great anticipation.

Great work and thank you.

I keep checking in to see if the next chapter has been released yet, hopefully you are not stuck on how it will unfold. I had a weird idea, Ben some how runs into one or more of his former foster kids from his youth. Maybe they also were able to create a life for themselves, or apply for a job at his first foundation?

Another extraordinary story from a truly fabulous writer. BurntRedstone has done it again! Thank you. Long live Ben Shepherd and all of your cast of characters!

Love your stories, Ben is a special character when I read this series I felt like what Ben is feeling in the story. Your magic connect readers very closely with the story.

Avery good story where is part 5 as it said 1 to 5 for A Shepherd's crook ?