All Comments on 'The Shepherd's Daughter'

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RobertWilsonRobertWilsonabout 4 years ago
Very good

A good well told story, with good description and content.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 4 years ago

When he leaves there should be carrying his child

_HaawK_HaawKabout 4 years ago
Well written story

It is always a pleasure tk read slow sensual writing that gives females a lot of respect .

cragsy1969cragsy1969about 4 years ago
Nice story

Would like to see a second part maybe comes back when finds out she is with child and her father who I think she said wasn't well has died and he comes back to be with her and make more babies and live happily ever after.

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I put words to page. This is a hobby, a diversion. Every once in a while a little story or scenario makes it's way into my mind. After it gets refined and reworked, eventually it makes it's way here. Sometimes fantasies of control. Sometimes the joy of coming together. Hopefu...