All Comments on 'The Show'

i love this story; its so playful. it seems to be written for a male. what man wouldn't want Monica for a girlfriend. its very erotic and i hope to see many more from you. love...oak man

hehe! it was me in the audience! i came back the next weekend, thinking there would be another performance, but lo, all i saw was an old janitor... :(

The magic is in the aura of homely innocence surrounding a perfect fuck. Perhaps the "loving" in "loving lust" does it or maybe the spontaneity. Whatever it is, its great fun.

I really liked that! I believe it could happen and it's very sexy