All Comments on 'The Shower'

Loved your story. You did a nice job of communicating your feeling of lust. Keep writing!

I know what I'll be thinking about tomorrow morning during my shower. Ahhhh...

Nice job setting the arena and smooth transition and short and sweet...just long enough. Good writing

More often than not, stories are written by men, their thoughts, their fantasies, mostly their lack of knowledge as to how women really think, and act, sexually. How refreshing to get an authentic first person insight from a true woman.

As said above, it is so nice to see a woman's perspective of their sexual desire. There are far fewer female authors here than male. You make us all want to surprise you by opening the door and joining you and satisfying your every need.