All Comments on 'The Shower and the Seduction Ch. 02'

by sixdayssouth

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wow!!

Wow!!

More, please...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Amazing

One of the best series I've ever read on Literotica. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Please don't wait another year to update this one.

Great story. Very hot! Please keep writing... and sooner the better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A long wait

It was a long wait for part two but worth it. Now they have to banish what bit of guilt they might still feel and just get on with enjoying their taboo relationship. Part three soon, please, don't make us wait another year.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot, hot, hot.

Great tension. I also filled my hand, stomach, chest, and chair arms just like him!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GREAT STORY

One of the best i have read.DOUBLE HOT!!!!

Just hope Kim reads it and thinks of me!!!!

hornacekhornacekalmost 17 years ago
a dream? come on!

This would have gotten 100, but you had to make the best part of chapter 1 only a dream - very tacky. Everything else was great. PLEASE don't start Chapter 3 with "I woke up and masturbating in front of Mom was all a dream".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
very good story...very hot

Keep up the story line. This is amazingly hot!!! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WHAT A TWIST!!

wow, great writing, to be honest most stories die for me after the initial climax, it tends to be more of the same. but you did a great job on this. love to see more stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
=D

Love the story! You're a great author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
his mother watched as he unloaded his balls all over the place

whanna guess where he'll be unloading his young balls next?

homerjayhomerjayalmost 11 years ago
pay off

hope this is real. :) either way it's hot.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 10 years ago

Very fucking hot!!

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