All Comments on 'The Showgirl and the Engineer Pt. 01'

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AnnaValley11 over 4 years ago

Great start - looking forward to reading your next chapter

Great opening - has all the makings of a wonderful romance

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Grammar ....

Good basic storyline, but grammatically too many errors. "Your" vs You're" and several other typos (door when you meant or) which took my interest away from the story briefly. Sorry to be the "grammar police" but someone has to do the job! Keep writing, but please watch the grammar.

Buzzard61 over 4 years ago

Well

I thought it was a great read and can't wait for the next enstalment.

Keep up the good work.

linnear over 4 years ago

Amazing Start

Wow, that was so good. I can't wait for the next part, I was so captivated by the story.

BBeinhart over 4 years ago

Huh?

“Of course all characters are over 21”. Why is that a matter of course? It is mentioned in al all the author’s introductions. WTF!?!

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