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Click hereAlex was about to say his goodbyes and head off home in Brian's Dads car. But she insisted she didn't want to stay another night alone in this room.
Emily packed a small amount of luggage and Alex hoisted it into the boot of the car. The majority of the journey home they drove in silence. Nothing but the radio was heard as blasts from the past were being played all night long.
It wasn't a trouble dropping off Brian's dads car. Everyone in the house would have been asleep. Brian had texted him to let him know his dad had come in around the back and didn't see that the car had been missing.
Alex and Emily walked together under the moonlight for the rest of the way home. It felt like he was walking a girl home after a party. Finally they arrived at the house. Alex reached to turn the door knob when he felt Emily's hand grip his arm.
Alex turned to look into his Sisters eyes. As if in slow motion, Emily stepped towards Alex and kissed him, mouth to mouth.
Awww....It was just getting good!
Too many details of being physically attractive that just went on and on....4 stars
I liked the story a pity the grammar wasn't quite up to scratch but these things can be sorted out with a bit of care but the story as a vehicle to introduce a virgin ( I mean that loosely ) couple to the delights of incest is a good one, I notice there is more of this already written so hopefully these errors have been corrected.
You could use an editor. The story could be tightened up a bit. But overall, this is a good start!
Yyyaaayyy!!! A hero brother, just in time to save his big sister from the bozo "boyfriend"!!
You work does need some cleaning up in the grammar and spelling departments...but it is still a *5*Five Star work! On to Chapter 2...