All Comments on 'The Sibling Diaries Pt. 07'
by TommyTales
- 17 Comments
Frankie1952over 2 years agoSensational, this is going to get really interesting now and I don't mean in a good way.
Anonymousover 2 years agoCondoms need to be banned in erotic fiction. The only exception, when they burst
ScottishTexanover 2 years agoBusted! Now it's getting good. But you weren't exactly clear on who yelled WTF at the end. I'm sure that 99% of the readers think that it was Melissa yelling about the scene in front of her. But it also could have easily been Emily yelling at Melissa for standing there and watching the incest show. I'm hoping that you clear that up with the beginning of the next installment.
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I'm also concerned about Mrs. Williams. With some of the silly mistakes that you have made previously, is she really a Mrs. and not a Miss? If she's absolutely a Mrs., what is the back story on her husband? Is she a widow or is her husband still alive? Is she still married or is she divorced? Or is she a cheating slut banging her coworker? Too much ambiguity there.
I gave you a 4/5 this time around for the slight improvements. I'm glad that Alex has both Emily and Rose in his heart. Keep working harder.
Anonymousover 2 years agoGreat story hope 🙏 more chapters will be coming soon like fucking melissa and rose 🌹
Devilbobyalmost 2 years agoBest episode yet I hope you do write some more of this. It just got really good.
SAV12over 1 year agoWHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY? YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS, TOO MANY HOLES TO FILL IN. KEEP IT GOING.
lovedefactoabout 1 year agoYou write very well as far as the plot goes but PLEASE!!! Finish the story.
Anonymous15 days agoThe story is good . But you need someone to edit and spell check and word choices are confusing.
As with most of the other commenters: Please finish the story.
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