All Comments on 'The Sins of Aunt Susan Ch. 02'

by eronoire

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TesshuTesshuover 18 years ago
Excellent work.

I thought this chapter was excellent, you wrote a great piece. I hope you continue on with this story, and I wouldn't change anything you wrote in this chapter. Try not to let the negative comments get to you, a writer writes for themselves, not the audience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great work

simply superb. don't stop now. you have to continue. its your duty.......

pubelesspubelessabout 17 years ago
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you have to continue with this great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Magnificent

Great continuation...more

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
Good tale!

No pun intended. Please give us a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice story but

a pity you turned him in to a complete fucking asshole of a jerk - would have been better with fun and humour added to it out in the country.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MORE with Aunt Susan

Pleeeeeezzzzzz!

MykelsRoomMykelsRoomover 2 years ago

domt blend words rhen you have a hit..hot story

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594192 months ago

Not bad it was entertaining thanks

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