All Comments on 'The Sissy Mark'

I hope she dosen't change back and her Tom live happily ever after 🙂

Very well done

You put there a content warning for right-wing transphobes lol.

But seriosly, this was probably the best story I read so far on this side!

Keep up the good work :D

I loved this story! It was cute and sweet and hot all at once! I would love a sequel!

Let her find the fair and make the changes permanent xxx Loved your style of writing

I loved this story, forced fem combined with true romance!

Very well done. I stayed awake longer than I should have but I couldn’t stop reading til I finished it. Sweet, hot and even left a possibility to continue.

really great story, you've not lost your touch.

Great story. Bits of humor seeded into the intricate struggle of your main character’s search for “Self”. We all have a path to travel in this life. It would be so much easier if we could all accept each others individual journey on their chosen path.

You have done a great job with this story please finish it. I know your not done.

I was even thinking of being the girl in the story. I have lived a life and I enjoy being the female. I wished this could happen to me. I would welcome it thoroughly.

Great story. Loved it oqJ9Aa

Can anyone suggest similar story this was amazing

Please write more parts, broaden the middle of the story, there are many awesome things that can be done before changing back.

I loved the story! Despite the supernatural premise, it was incredibly realistic, in addition to being totally hot. It flowed well, and unlike a lot of lengthy stories here, I never got bored and wanted to skip to the 'good parts' - I wanted to read every word. Well done, and best of luck at winning the contest!

That was amazingly well written! You have a great talent for storytelling!!

This is an extremely well written story, loved it. Just felt a bit bad for the abrupt ending. Please write more parts of it, or another version with happier ending.

i had hoped for a nicer ending or is there more comming?

This is amazingly hot.

This is truly excellent story! It's very hot and with fully fleshed out characters—exactly the kind of story we've grown to expect from Son_of_Battles.

My only objection is that the Latin is hilariously bad. <i>Verto</i> is the first-person singular present active indicative form of the verb meaning "to turn around" (as in, to physically turn in a circular motion). <i>Femina</i> really does mean "woman," but here it's in the nominative singular form, meaning it can only be the subject of the sentence. The phrase <i>Verto femina</i> therefore literally mean "I, a woman, am currently turning around."

My guess is that you probably meant for the curse to mean "Turn into a woman." The correct way to say that in Latin would actually be: "<i>Mutare in feminam</i>." <i>Mutare</i> is the second-person singular present passive imperative form of the verb <i>muto</i>, meaning "to change," so it literally means "Be changed." The preposition <i>in</i> indicates a change "into" something and <i>feminam</i> is in the accusative case to indicate motion towards.

@Fereniki_Alexandrou Thank you for that quick Latin lesson, and I apologize for not double checking that before posting. It will definitely teach me to severely lower my expectations and faith in google translate, lol. If you cannot tell, English is my first language. I'm grateful that you were still able to enjoy my story despite the horrible Latin, and I will most definitely make that change to the story as soon as possible. Again, thank you for pointing this out.

SoB

A long time ago I read a book called 'Twilight Eyes' by Dean Koontz. He told the reader that the supposed home of carnies is Gibsonton, Florida. I googled it, he was right.

If your character actually wants his 'true self' back, he could go to Gibsonton and probably find the woman who put the curse on him. Worth a shot, anyway.

Son_of_Battles.

Hmm. In middle school & high school I lived in the town the State Fair was held in. I wouldn't be easy to find, yet I doubt it would be difficult to find the Organizer of the carnival to learn where they had gone next. Yeah, I know, I like a happy ending, too. Plus, I can't help but think that Mira would appreciate knowing her curse had had the beneficial effect she'd intended.

I'm amazed at how quick of a read this was while still being a fully formed and complete work. And for once the main character was arguably the biggest jerk in the story and got punished with a creative curse that drove the story forward.

Yeah there was a missing quotation mark and Street Fighter doesn't have decapitations but those don't detract from the quality on offer here. This is a damn good piece of writing! And it doesn't read like it was rushed as the author's word at the beginning would imply. Very well done all around!

Look for the carnival and he has to gypsy to put his back on me and make me a woman all the way around

I loved this story! Any chance for a sequel?

OUTSTANDING THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING.

Love it ... Its one lf my favourite stories so far hope.. to see a sequel or a new one with similar theam

What a romp! Do more of that voodoo that you do so well.

This needs another chapter at the very least. Hawwwwwwwwt!

Brilliantly written as usual. I need more.

I like it very much and your writing style is wonderful

Thanks for the beautiful story. You are a gem.

Loved it..but could use another chapter.

I think I would have instantly started searching for those carnies. They wouldn’t be hard to find. I would kill to be a hot blonde and multiple orgasms!

perfect length (and width!)

Really Luved this story of yours, it was such a gripping tale that held me captivated from start to finish so why do I have this feeling that it’s been cut short, sorry that’s just how I feel . Xxx