All Comments on 'The Sixth Floor'

Should be filled under bin and put in it

For all the masterful word usage, at least twice there were shutters where there should be shudders. Hopefully you do know the difference. Left me with a weird sense of a whack in the side of the head. Hopefully you might get an editor who knows how to critically proof-read.

Ignore the others. It was pretty well written and very descriptive. Good job.

Nice descriptions! The details draw me in. I can picture it in my head - almost feel it.