All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 002'

Try giving POV from the healer or other chacthers has they interact with the MC

I like the premise of this story but Good Lord, I don't need 8 paragraphs to explain the scoring system with multipliers.

You need to pick up the pace majorly, because an entire chapter explaining the mechanics and scoring system of your lewd isekai is pretty goddamn terrible

This entire chapter should have been condensed down to a single paragraph at most.

We have a new word, we have a overscreen with inputs, we have mechanics, and interactions are next...

I left a comment on this story 9 days ago? Yet they keep popping up like they are brand new. One or two random chapters like they keep getting submitted with the others missing. Weird.

@LeakyFaucit The numbering of the chapters was off which messed with the order in which they appeared in the series. As such, I requested the guys atLit to change up the numbers and repost them. That's why they are reappearing...

Ohhh wow the info dump was a bit to get through...sorta got use to seeing the tables when it comes to these litrpg stories..

The complainers just don't like to read anything but sex .

Good story so far .

Very cool concept!

This chapter is a game instructions set with an attempt to make it part of a fiction tale. Not terribly exciting and doesn't progress the narrative. Greg needs to do things and receive points on his display to appreciate the game rules rather than having it set out in this rather mechanistic way.

Hope there's more to this story than just sex.

I've read quite a few stories that had imbedded games, and usually they are enjoyed mostly by gamers who get into the points and the strategies to get them. I've already lost most interest in your story as there's not much to it. For a take on a roll-playing games/stories that never get lost in playing mode strategies check out

Sable and the Supers,

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=523598&page=submissions

and "A God Called Bruce"

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1196364&page=submissions

It's looks like RPG game,

However i just found this story

I’ll go with the anon comment from 4 months ago, reading the instruction book from an rpg game isn’t a story, by all means feature it as a small part of a story, but not so it pushes out the actual story and plotline, of which there is virtually nothing: guy dies and is “reincarnated” but is stuck in a RPG character body which is injured and being healed by a hot woman. That’s it? For 3.4k words it’s too thin. 3⭐️ cheers, Ppfzz.

I am an eye-oriented thinker who believes that reading to read such a mass of information makes no sense without a goal or purpose. why earn points in the system is not clear. Why play in the chaos of the four categories if there is no obvious or even unobvious way to win or lose? I guess, I am just confused and not understand what a guy who is not completely whole emotionally or physically can do to accomplish the goals given through some frameworks that on the surface make little sense.

Building it up, enjoying the content !!!

This chapter nearly turned me off of the story. Can't think of anything more boring than reading something like this. You explained how multipliers work. Do you think we are 5?

Overall liked this chapter fine. A little verbose but now I know what I'm in for. Not everyone likes video game isekai, I get it, but the genre is clear.