by BlaQQuill
You timed his upgrade perfectly. It was just beginning to become a bit repetitive. So will he learn what the magic points are good for or will that be after he learns how to project his healing power? Loving the story line. 5 stars.
Ummmm.....is this actually going to progress to something other than Greg laying in bed? You've built up the history of him, the healer, and now the chieftain's daughter with an exhaustive explanation of the "points" system. Even seems like the system is skewed--if he earned tens or hundreds of thousands of points for just being touched or looked at by the healer, but little from anyone else, then progress will be extremely slow to add up points for any meaningful return on investment.
I really like the premise and the story line, but it is proceeding slower than molasses in a Siberian winter. I hope this improves. If not it will be ease to leave. Time invested is not justified by the information obtained.
I love the pace . Especially since the assholes want to rush you and insult you .
I just read the Authors Note for chapter 6 . Right on . I'm here for the long haul .
Not to be that guy but it was 4443 lust points that he gained lol. Loving the story tho keep up the good work
Gotta love a slow burn! :-) And the fact that this is chapter 005. The writer should take this all the way to 999. :-)
Have enjoyed the first 5 parts of this story very much. Will comment again after next 5.
This story is really awesome! Slow but deep. The world building is excellent and the way you convey the danger and characterization make for great atmosphere and tension. Love it!
I really appreciate how elegantly you moved from Alena's perspective of Shalia, to Shalia's perspective of Alena. Well done! You have the skills of an attorney who may need to adroitly argue either perspective in a conflict.
It brought Shalia to life for me.
Enjoying this story, and haven't scene much of this genre here. Glad it's represented!
Can't wait to see what opens up from here.