All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 007'

To mugh details on the shop that I had to sceam it

loving the series so far! Keep the chapters coming

I'm sure this won't raise the danger level at all 🤣

@Chipmonk Sorry for that, but like I said before, all these details will later on prove to be crucial to how the story progresses. I have to present it now, otherwise, many readers will end up confused in future...

I understand why some people might say there’s too much detail, but I have no idea how to set the understanding of the world/situation without it.

I suspect that you’ll get complaints any time you have a chapter without sex in it

When the healer watches this it is going to be quite interesting to see how much she figures out just from the visual ques. She should be able to figured out most of what i going on when the Siegel shows up,. But she may be confused when he soon after goes unconscious. LOVE this story line. THANK YOU 5 stars

For those who are interested, Chapter Eight is already up on my Patreon.

The pace of the story is getting pretty slow and it's suffering from the great detail put into the magic system. While I think it's cool to know that the author put work into the foundation of that system, it drastically slows things down. Essentially, this whole chapter of the story could be covered in 3 or 4 sentences. "Guy spends magic points and faints due to pain. Lusty ghost thing hovers near and whispers 'Master.'"

Well done! Really enjoying the character progress, I know it’ll take time but I can’t wait until he’s a fully fledged sorcerer. Cheers, keep it up!

Chapter 8 got sent back due to some issues so it'll be up on Thursday.

I for one like the slow build up in the story, but generally I am here for the story aspect mixed with the erotica. Thank you for this interesting fable.

Shapachan

What happened to the story? Your newest post reverted back to chapter 001 and chapters 002-005 disappeared

There is something bizarre going on with your account. Many of the other chapters in this series had their publish date changed to the future and when opening them it gives the 404 does not exist error. Don't know if Lit screwed up or you did something, but its been like this for more than a day

Can you use actual numbers for the list and magic points instead of there words? It makes interpreting the story far more quicker and helps to not detract from the storyline 🤙

+1 for the suggestion to use numbers instead for the magic points.

I'm here for the story. Keep em coming

I am more apt to read longer stories but this one is very good. Faster faster more more

I admire your imagination. keep going please.

Hopefully it's finally going to get better.

Strongly agree with anonymous. This was an entire chapter of nothing, and basically means that all the points MC saved up got spent doing nothing. Just pointlessly longwinded.

Pace is slow but I like the novel like quality. Keep up the good work.

I can't log into my account here, but; I'm CelticMommy ;-)

I'm absolutely Loving this novel! Reminds me in it's scope of Tefler and Etaski. Great work!

its getting hot in here!! well done author!!

starting to pick up steam!

You know, I should have guessed what forum this Familiar could be. But my brain didn't quite get there in time!