All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 011'

This entry felt short, but while I was irritated at the format of this tale, with the short chapters, I am coming to like it. It is engaging. That said, I'd like a little bigger bite with each serving!

Thanks!

Great new chapter, setting foundations for more growth and change.

As much as I like the story, the slow, drip by drip, presentation is infuriating. I plan to wait until the final chapter is posted before trying to read it again.

This story has vast potential, in some ways I am reminded of the wheel of time series with a twist.

I definitely look forward to each new chapter, usually checking daily for any updates. Although the short spurts of story can feel somewhat slow at times I'll be looking forward to re-reading the whole thing once it's finished!

still enjoying it - please keep going

Interesting story. My main advice would be to try to stop over-using certain expressions in your writing. For example, the word "however" is used a lot

In one paragraph it occured three times in one of these paragraphs. There are other phrases too, but that one sticks out to me the most. It detracts from one's enjoyment in reading the chapters.

An enjoying the story. Please keep up the good work. The only thing I have seen is that sometimes the amount of Lust and magic earned dose not seem to be complete. It is like the thousands are left of seventy four to seventy five. I can see this story go in several directions and most of the will be good. Thank you for spending the time to write and share it with everyone.

Keeps building another great chapter thanks

Did the war start before Greg even got there (to this new life & place)? He needs to find out who his enemies are. Real fast.

nice

Depth and mystery are being added to the story. Nice!

Woah, the plot thickens

I like soup.