All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 012'

Just wish the chapters were longer..

enjoying it ... brevity and all

Chapter 15 is up on Patreon.

You would been better off adding last weeks and this weeks together. Then putting out a short 1 and 1 1/2 page installment. I love to see longer chapters even if took all month to write if i saw a 10page chapter i would be blown away to finally have a chapter to get behind rate and love. It be better then these half ass chapters so far

I like cliffhanger chapter endings, so I don't mind the way you leave off but must agree that the short blast method is very stilted. Even 3-4 pages every few weeks would flow better. That said, I really like the concepts - keep at it

Swiss cheese in the character profiles and their life experiences. old soul and older woman for one. His knowledge of high school chemistry and science. Her knowledge of magic and alchemy. Neither are blushing naive virgins , so why do they think and act like their in junior high school ? And why use manipulation and lies on a deadly healer who wishes to get revenge on those who lied and manipulated her? Surely he has read Carl Yung. What is with all this passive aggressive communication when his thoughts are tempered and assertive. Honesty is the only way to be allies otherwise it will implode and become master?thrall.A honesty ,assertive speak, and a mind of cooperation over compromise is needed for trust to evolve. As for erotica perhaps she could be a Cuckquean to his lust conquest candidates . yours truly, Nunbane

Great storyline

I absolutely love this story. Although the individual chapters could be longer as some have suggested the story line, writing, and dialogue are all first rate. I liken the chapters to an impeccably prepared meal that satisfies the diner in every way without leaving the diner feeling he or she has eaten too much, and makes them anxious to have the next meal. With long stories that are presented as one post I usually read them over a period of time because I have other things to do. A post twice the length of this one would likely be the most that I would read at one sitting. We all have different appetites. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

You are doing a fantastic job. The build up is fantastic. Keep up the good work.

nothing new happened.

He already knew he was injured, scared, and nearly died.

He already had been milking the healer for points

He already felt the patrarchal emotions from the prior owner of the body.

Super glad I joined your patreon, wasn't aware of it until I saw the comment here but definitely will he supporting for the entirety of this series! Came for the smut and stayed for the plot 😁

Good story . I will be looking forward to more . Unfortunately my Patreon budget is overmaxed out . But this is good stuff .

Awesome another great chapter in this tale can't wait for the next chapter

I have to say you are really putting together an enjoyable story. I am enjoying the opening of a much larger novel/series and hope the characters, story development, and details continue on the same plane. I do agree about the later chapters being shorter, but we all budget our time. Especially the Authors. Good job. I am anticipating the next chapters.

the world building was amazing at first but now seeing that you’re only dropping these short chapters full of filler once a week? i’m not waiting a year just to get some actual plot. maybe i’ll come back in 2025 when you’ve finished this

I am so amazed when I see a comment like the one just below. He complains about something he got for free, instead of thanking the author. I would hate to be his child when he comes home with just a lousy A from school and gets told he is a total failure because he should have an A plus.

Shapachan

PS to the author thanks for an interesting story, I hope you are able to continue with it.

Learning the lay of the land and making plans. Smart move

Dear Goddess, mother of my soul... You Sir are a clever wordsmith! I unequivocally LOVE your writing style!

Once again this is CelticMommy

clever clever way

Didn’t he love some people on earth?

Very much enjoying the story as it builds.

A few typos for you

The boy before him s/b the boy before her

how the thing hand just slapped s/b hadn't

"Am .. am I wrong" needs a ? "Am .. am I wrong?"

Right on!

Fun trick, though I'm not sure it's gonna work. Alena is smart, having no effect at all might be behind her expectation.