by BlaQQuill
Oh this is so interesting . I love it . This new revelation may open much more potential for Greg .
Your getting much better at this.. Keep it up. Try for three or four page..
Ghost.
I like the story and see great potential going forward.
Unfortunately, I hate chapters like this one, as a regular chapter it is fine. But in this instance, you have used it as a filler chapter to draw out the suspense of chapter 20 and will more than likely use the next one or two chapters to do the same before concluding chapter 20. Can't stand it when authors do that. It's the least creative way to add suspense to a story in my opinion.
This chapter is filling the of this story before..
The last of this tale IM feel alot missing spot
God job n thank
Nolruk has a pretty expansive vocabulary for an illiterate backwater villager who's whole society is built around hunting due to the scarcity of food.
So when I guessed Uncle was withering, that was exactly right, to the word.
Rift to Earth? Maybe, but probably wherever Greg's soul traveled after death is more likely. Maybe heaven or something like it? Also maybe the realm of love or lust somehow?? Less clear how that would be the case but could accounts for things. Though our lust goddess seemed to not know Greg, but knew Roka was intended, so that doesn't make sense.