All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 021'

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pk2curiouspk2curious10 months ago

Oh this is so interesting . I love it . This new revelation may open much more potential for Greg .

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Once again a great read - thanks and keep it up

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Your getting much better at this.. Keep it up. Try for three or four page..

Ghost.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I like the story and see great potential going forward.

Unfortunately, I hate chapters like this one, as a regular chapter it is fine. But in this instance, you have used it as a filler chapter to draw out the suspense of chapter 20 and will more than likely use the next one or two chapters to do the same before concluding chapter 20. Can't stand it when authors do that. It's the least creative way to add suspense to a story in my opinion.

Blacksword404Blacksword40410 months ago

Keep it up. I'm looking forward to more of the story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story, just wish the chapters were longer. (I must read to fast)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Revelation of beginning by error, misshapen chance. Some interrogation this.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice plot twist and explanation for the MC coming to the world

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This chapter is filling the of this story before..

The last of this tale IM feel alot missing spot

God job n thank

heymheym7 months ago

If you don’t like the story don’t read it, stop crying all the time

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nolruk has a pretty expansive vocabulary for an illiterate backwater villager who's whole society is built around hunting due to the scarcity of food.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This little step back to explain some of the history was a nice touch

ClearmuseClearmuse14 days ago

So when I guessed Uncle was withering, that was exactly right, to the word.

Rift to Earth? Maybe, but probably wherever Greg's soul traveled after death is more likely. Maybe heaven or something like it? Also maybe the realm of love or lust somehow?? Less clear how that would be the case but could accounts for things. Though our lust goddess seemed to not know Greg, but knew Roka was intended, so that doesn't make sense.

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