by BlaQQuill
Excellent story, it's just the pacing seems to be a bit off.. Some chapters seem to be a rush of things happening where as others seem to be filled with, for the want of a better word.. Filler, and seem to stagnate..
I'm enjoying the story... but I'm getting impatient for at least a *little* bit more sexual content. Even just hints of it seem like they could make these chapters more exciting.
Really enjoying this story. At this rate it seems you will have at least 50 chapters. Looking forward to reading it all. Ty
I second Jamijn, I’d buy the book. Your writing is incredible, I could visualize the whole battle through your words, highly cinematic.
Patrick Rothfuss eat your heart out.
Unless you’re Patrick and this is what you’ve been doing instead of writing book 3? Please finish this series, too many good fantasy stories never get finished.
Good stuff, nice balance of action and exposition.
Knew the magic shop had to come into play heavily here, such a cheat code.