All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 023'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

on the edge of my seat! phew.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Cool!

BlaQQuillBlaQQuill9 months agoAuthor

Chapter Twenty Nine is up on my Patreon.

lassidor1lassidor19 months ago

dial magic absorbtion to 100% and kiss a girl

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too much thinking

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Terrible you wanna write good fictional stories(story is pretty good btw) take your butt to Reddit. I’m here to get one off not to read Harry Potter books.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Just when you think the trouble is over ... more sh** starts hitting the fan. Cliffhanger alert

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wow, impressive mind twist

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Note to Greg: don't pick up suspicious staffs.

Olorin_the_MaiarOlorin_the_Maiar3 months ago

I am really enjoying your story and plan to continue reading as much as you post. So as a bit of constructive criticism; most of this chapter could have been condensed into five or six paragraphs. You are unnecessarily repeating information, that us the ready already know. Again thank you for writing, and sharing your story.

CreepythinmanCreepythinman2 months ago

The plot thickens! This has been one WILD ride so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

ClearmuseClearmuse4 days ago

OK so touching the staff like that required a little bit carrying the Idiot Ball, but I get it.

Curious what tricks will be done to drain mama out of poor Alena. Cut yourself or something to get healing?

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