All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 033'

Im looking forward to the next part of the dungeon.

Chapter Forty is up on my Patreon.

A ways a good read - many thanks

Excellent story. Nice, slow, burn.

Your writing and the storyline continue to exceed my expectations. I continue to anxiously await your next chapter. And like other readers I wish they were longer, moving the story along faster. But not at the risk of receiving a poorer “product.” Thank you for a wonderful story.

The bartering continues .

Very good my only wish is that the chapters could be longer

So then .... "fooling around" has been delayed, perhaps? Let the (gladiator) games begin. 💥🔥

Well written. Engaging dialog. Cogent and consistent narrative. I could not wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for the entertaining gift.

Excellent story. Just too short for a chapter. Please write more and make them long per chapter

The user of pronouns to be careless, making reading more difficult and less pleasurable than it could be.

she just couldn't take his eyes off him. S/B take her eyes off him.

This happens rather regularly

Of course he remembered the bow, should never have counted him.