by BlaQQuill
Getting better and better
I for one do not mind the pace - it gives me something to look forward to each week
Thank you for writing what appears to be a great piece of work.
If the sigil is fixed, then it can be used on aroma. That was some clever negotiating.
Crafty woman. Dealing with a deity must be treacherous. And she's probably one of the reasonable ones. Keep it coming.
This story just keeps getting better and better. Thank you, I’m looking forward the next chapter and beyond. *****
Great story. I always wait for two or more chapters to be posted so I can have a good read.
Well that chapter made huge progression . I always knew that somehow the Goddess above the tiers would at some point need to expose herself to Alena . It is so cool that Alena has a little bargaining power with her new discoveries . That will benefit Roka and Alena to their true potential . With this collaboration . It is also cool that this Goddess accepts this and will essentially supercharge the coming future efforts and ventures .
Personally I love the detailed hypotheticals and detailed explanations . Not boring to me at all .
Whether I have succeeded, I don't yet know as I haven't had the chance to test it out yet," she confessed.
I don't like weird repetition in a single sentence. Please remove 1 "yet" from this sentence.
To have this being as his enemy
Isn't this Alena's enemy? Therefore as her enemy, not his.
Ugh, just who is this primordial being? The incarnation of lust itself? Eros? The fates? Soooo many questions begging to be answered but leaving me hungry for more! Good job!