All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 040'

I do wonder over some of the parts of the story today. You spent a large part about nymphs and their way to gain power, when the town-wife aint a nymph.

Afterall, the story only have 2 pages.

Second, from what we know Roka have pants on, so how would cum end up on the wife?

Its just unplausable.

While I completely agree about the information for the nymphs, the author does explain that the pants are and magic and touching of a sexual nature in the previous chapter.

Excellent story so far. It's one of the very few that a look forward to reading. I have 2 very small criticisms though.

1. I would love to see longer chapters.

2. I think flirting between Roka and Olivia would be fun. Especially because he's said that he's wary of banging her. Him instigating the flirting and not following though, might be funny.

Great story, I wish there were more pages per chapter though

Very enjoyable yarn that you spin here, I am hooked! Very good mix of interesting world-building and erotica. Please keep this going! 👍

Love it - great read…wish they were longer

I love this chapter. The scene where the boss's wife unconsciously tries to absorb Roka's vitality to ascend due to her monster girl instincts was scorching in a sinfully way. I can only imagine the confusion she must feel, getting aroused just thinking about that scar-faced young man. Another thing is the guilty pleasure of reading about a wife succumbing to the MC – the feeling is addictive. Plus, I'm curious: could his essence awaken her lineage? Non-humans like monster girls, with their exotic appearance and quirks, are something I adore. I might have rambled a bit, but take my 5 stars, friend. See you next week >: ]

As always these are too short with too much rule background. I find the plot intriguing but the presentation not as much. As for Esbanos comment it the power of the pants

So Father, and the tale master, have set up the scene to force the two of them to come closer together as she is now the servant and he the head of house AKA master. Nice move, and 5 stars for another great installment.

GR8 chapter . Especially your take on nymphs . Very cool . I find no reason to complain at any of your presentation .

This is a great chapter. While I felt it ended to soon and abruptly, the fact that you are publishing new chapters regularly and frequently means it is just a minor inconvenience. I am wanting Roka to turn Shalia into a cum-slut but perhaps that role would be better filled by her mother. Shalia can just be mercilessly teased and not allowed relief until she becomes much more likable.

I never leave comments, but after binge reading the story up to this point I felt I had to say thank you. Your pacing and sortytelling is fantastic. Please do not let those who are looking for quick indulgence

deter you from telling your story.

I rate the story highly because it's wild, crazy and unpredictable. Which means that it's full of discovery and I love that.

He simultaneously got both women there, somehow???

I appreciate dad still trying to pair them up lul