by BlaQQuill
i am still hoping that Alena becomes a ride or die waifu (or at least one of them)
I'm hoping for a leap forward in time somewhere...it'll be 3000 chapters to tier 5 at this rate. Good story though
I do not think that it is in character for the healer to use an expletive as for example 'Heck'.
Another great chapter. This story is very much a slow burn but after waiting this long it seems like the story is finally starting to progress a bit. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I like the reasoning behind Greg's decision but it seems like they're missing another possible solution. Why not start pouring mana into someone like the Mayor's daughter and then train them as a healer? Is it mostly because of a lack of trust?
“blood, sweat, and tiers” I hope this was a pun. Love the story. 5 pointy things
interesting turn of events......I cant help but think that somewhere in the magic store at his disposal is something that would help the healer or himself expedite this process so that it wouldnt take 100s of years.
They spent so long talking about cleansing Alena's Life mana to not influence Greg's foundations. But if Greg is going to go down the path of a Life Mage, would it actually be helpful to use Life mana with the sigil?
I really like this story and the way that the early episodes are woven into these latter ones. It is becoming more intriguing and overall a better story with each succeeding chapter. Thank you.
Loved this chapter, i really look forward to every Wednesday when I get to read it!
I have really enjoyed your story thus far. I have been addicted to, and have been hanging on each chapter. I am sad that your story is only able to grow one chapter a week, but understand how daunting a task it would be to push more than one at a time. I can not wait and will be excited to open each new chapter that you bless us with.
without considering the risk hell be taking.
s/b
Without considering the risk he would be taking.
The topic is conditional and the verb should be constitutional as well.
And that, only after he'd shed blood, sweat, and tiers.
s/b tears, not tiers.
If you plan to sell your work as an ebook on Amazon as Tefler has done (not a bad idea), you need an editor. Perhaps Amazon will supply one. I can only tell you that your work, while creative and fun, is rife with verb tense errors that a reader wouldn't expect to pay for.
A bit of rational self interest as well as mutual benefit between master and student. An excellent way of gaining a sure chance for Greg/Roka to grow and cement Alena's chances of recovery. Very cool. The fact that it is not a simple deus ex machina is much appreciated.