All Comments on 'The Slap'

I hope you write more because this one was great. If ever this kind of thing could happen it would be with people who cared about each other as you expressed so well.

Really appreciate the comment, thanks for taking the time and for the encouragement. I had fun writing it but I can't believe the typos - thought I'd proofed it!?! LOL Glad you enjoyed it, sex should be fun and humour can seriously cut the tension in almost any situation.

But I think Nathan has lost her to Eric and he is going to know it was his own fault.

Thanks for the hot, cum worthy story. I liked the Australian lingo and setting as well as the characters and sex. Are your initials JB by any chance? ;)

Nathan sounds like an asshole and needs to have charges filed against him because he's too stupid to realize when no means no.

Very very hot story

Even though it was rough, it was still caring. His friends were respectful. I loved every minute