All Comments on 'The Slave Girl'

You don't know what you did to a virgin like me... you made me think of what I'm missing out on:(. my nipples were rock-hard, from the beginning to the end of the story'' thanks

Very hot.

Pretty good mr uhm faghag... I like some sweet in a story.

Great but why is this in non consent?

Please add more. I look forward to reading your other stories. :)

This story deserves a continuation.

so different from your usual genre yet just as amazing. You are a truly talented writer, I think what I love the most about your writing is that you really come to believe the emotions of the characters, its not about a quick fuck or a purely physical interaction, the emotions make it believable. Thank you for another fantastic read.

That was a great story, I love how gentle and loving he was towards her.

I loved the setting, and I must confess I usually skip through the sex, but this one kept me hooked from beginning to end. Excellent work.

Well written, cunningly concealing details about the place -- where-ever it is -- and the time -- whenever it is -- that it is set in.

One wonders what becomes of those two, but you could say that about a lot of stories. :)

I hope you give us more of these two.

Great little story. Excellent work.

I will save this story and read it often. I'm ruined for other authors. Please write more!!!

Please thank your friend who made you write this story on my behalf, and also ask him to apply more pressure for another just like it immediately. Seriously, though: that was one hell of a story, and I hope you'll work in this genre again.

That was a really well written story. Since my preferred genre is m/m I am going to have to read your stuff because your writing is beautiful!

very well done it would be great if you could make a sequel, one with her pregneant with a lot of breastmilk made only for her master to drink from(eventually shared a little with the child or put in a bottle for the child)

very good story dont stop writting!

I really enjoyed your story!

Very good story. You might want to leave out the cliches next time, though ("be gentle," "was it good for you").

Fantastic! Love your stories!

...out of your comfort zone.

And another great story.

This was a really great story, both in the setup and in the execution. You really know what you're talking about, esp. in terms of D/S & M/S relations. You shouldn't sell yourself short :)

Great start of a storyline that I hope there are additional chapters. Thank you! :-)

One of the best I've read here so far.

i'm so glad you listened to your friend. i really enjoyed this story. can you write more? i hope so.

That was lovely, sweet and tender. If only all deflowerings could be so sweet. Alas, men don't really get any good at sex until their late 20s...

You definitely need to write more!! Part 2 perhaps?

Look what I stumbled across! Girl that was *so* hot, sweet and a joy to read. Just wow. And I'm not much for the straight stuff lol ;)

Great job!

~M

and arousing tale.

I may write others eventually, but now I have story threads to finish

You give us such a wide range of characters, from hard and domineering to soft and sweet, I love that about your stories. Although it's not your usual, I really liked it!

I liked it. IT was a good start with a lot of background.

Leaves the possibility of more to the story...

Nice story- the perfect combination of sweetness, reluctance and lust. Stories of painful first times get old very quickly and this was a pleasant surprise in being a different, very enjoyable and very well written story. Particularly impressive given your usual genre is gay male- I hope you consider writing more stories like this! :)