All Comments on 'The Slave, the Snake, and the Sinner Pt. 03'

So sorry to hear about your very stressful year! You must be so brave to be doing it with so much grace. Good luck with the house situation. I hope this next year is much better. Sending you good wishes.

You have had a lot to deal with. Come back at your own pace. We will all still be waiting. Ditto to the above comments too!

First of all, I'm glad you're back. I love your writing style and look forward to each chapter, regardless of which story you update.

However, I'm a bit confused by part three here... It's not new story line, it's just a duplicate of part two. Why? When will we get to read new material, oh great one??

Hi Steffi.... First off, my condolences on the loss of your parents this past year.

Secondly, glad to see you back on Lit.... however, as much as this chapter is enjoyable, it is an exact duplicate of Part 2. I have a feeling this was just a simple case of uploading the wrong file. Hopefully you will be able to get the real Part 3 posted soon. May your muse shine brightly upon you. *warm smile*

My deepest sympathy for your losses. I just lost my 30 yr old son before Christmas unexpectedly, and the pain is unrelenting. Currently I’m using distraction and denial as my go-to coping strategies. Your fans are always grateful for any submissions. Looking forward to seeing the real chapter 3 soon.

😬 Isn’t this chapter just a resubmission of chapter TWO?!?!

Thank you guys for your kind comments...I uploaded the REAL part three this morning so hopefully that will be up soon. Part 4 needs editing (not too much) and I have a first draft of part 5 (last chapter). I'm trying get hard to climb out of the pits.

¨ukrainian slave ship¨, but crew with names that are perhaps martian?

pseudo-ukrainian words thrown about - none correct. i consider the source, and like her writing - so long as she sticks to ´murrican.

do.not.put.phony.other language.words.into your stories!!

unless you do some research - or get an edit by someone not a product of usa ed.

Please give us the final chapter

Please finish this great story