All Comments on 'The Sleepover Ch. 02'

"She opened the door and stepped in quietly, closing the door behind her and locking it."

How did the daughter open the door when it was locked as your story said?

Not a bad mistake but many will notice this. Still I like where you're going with it and hope you continue it.

great second chapter but then you leave us hanging, cock in hand, begging for more!

I too double checked the "locked the door" passage, but then just figured Cindy thought she locked it, but didn't turn the lock fully.

now stop reading these comments and get back to writing chapter 3!

Such a dickhead only thinking with his cock and not the girls

"the rest of the girls lied around..."

Let's try "lay around".

Make another

Katie and Cindy are going to be such good friends after this.

Get back to writing the next chapter please.

What the fuck!!! How can you stop like this, there has to be the third chapter we need to know how it ends so get busy and finish it