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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Started well

... but sadly tumbled into a jumbled mess.

I think it would have worked better to stop at the point the three women got it together but without Kelly knowing Sir was controlling the girls too.

CH2 could then turn it into the orgy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

What a waste of time...........

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ignore the trolls

Loved the story. More please.

Amisit__ScintillaAmisit__Scintillaover 3 years ago
Shame

It was an enjoyable story to begin with but sadly it went downhill like a "Slippery Slope", far too.much going on and rather far fetched.

mazerunnermazerunnerover 3 years ago
Good setup ...

... but needs more work, keep it realistic and draw out the story more!

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 3 years ago

My wife of 50 years and I both loved this story! Pay no attention to the anons who are talking out their asses.

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I just love to write stories, particularly those that build up over time. Whilst not prolific in terms of published works, I have a large number of unfinished stories that I will complete and publish in due course. If you like the themes of my stories or my writing style and...