All Comments on 'The Slumber Party Ch. 08'

Okay, Kathryn-

That was really close, with Rod, Melissa, and Audrey...especially with Audrey expressing her feelings about Rod like that! Then, you make nice by having Melissa come out on top, with her acceptance of the situation, and enlisting her sister's help to 'handle' Rod's libido!!

I am going to make this comment here, and from personal experience (yes, I am a guy, and I am still gonna say this!) Every time we have sex with a different person, we give away a part of ourselves; Audrey has depleted her well, so-to-speak, as far as her feelings towards other guys, and now that Rod has been nice to her, as opposed to having his way and moving on, it is not surprising you would write her character this way..."art imitates life", as the old saying goes.

I am quite happy you write this way; there is no condemnation here, at m east not from me...I really do like the emotional aspect of this!

Five Stars...AGAIN and Again!