All Comments on 'The Sly Wife'

Thanks for sharing.

Didn't Sbrooks103x write esentially the exact same story Ex Wife's Revenge 8/7/17? Maybe you missed it, but it's there.

Not saying Santee copied the story as he is a good author in his own right, but the stories are the same. To be honest, I have seen this same story on Quora, Facebook, and other places. No idea who did it originally. No offense to the author.

The sweet smell of success.

I'm sure I've read this exact same plot before.

Nice bit of revenge for the betrayed wife. Her husband was a real asshole to dump her like that.

She gets the house but i thought there would be more revenge. She accepted the finality of the marriage so calmly.

S 11th

I loved this short tale of a clever ex-wife evening up the score with the help of a few raw prawns... Your handling of characters and plot were perfect. More please!!!!!!

But the bitch wife would have to pay dearly for that. She thinks she's entitled. I don't see anyone being entitled to something they can't afford. Beside the taxes will be too much for her-so I see a tax foreclosure.

The exact same idea. Fish in the curtain rods. Two major errors ruin this story. In the divorce she would have gotten the house. He's the CEO and she owns half of his ass. She can not only afford the house but she'd get it free and clear in the divorce. And he wants and needs to be divorced. His little fuck bunny will want her own house, not a house in which her husband has lived for all those years with an ex-wife. The smell? Come on man - get real! Call a professional crime scene cleaner like ServPro. They actually have machines that trace odors and the problem would have been solved immediately. Besides - at the end of the day all she has is a house, not a husband and a life. This was just silly.

1 star

Still ok.

Almost this exact same plot before. Only thing that's different is that you wrote children into this story.

Curtain Rods Secret, by LightPen, in Humor and satire. I alstroemerias saw another story with the same. Plot on here.

Cuz yo putrid cunt stinks even more and yo sagging tits are scratching the floor and out your loose arsehole leaks crap.

Guess daddy has da betta deal now.

I knew what this was. I can not believe there isn't even a spin on the original, this IS the original. I've even seen this exact same story on TV. 1 star for plagiarism.

Glad to see this from another angle, just too bad it wasn't original - but then in the original the bastard and his current bitch took the rods with them to their new place... LOL

4/5

As the author of "Ex-wife's Revenge," which this story appears to be based on, I really don't feel ;plagiarized.

Santee obviously used the same situation and put his own spin on it. I'll leave it to others more impartial than me to judge if he did enough.

As a long-time supporter of writers' rights to play with others' stories, and one whose own variation was pulled, in my opinion unfairly, for being "too derivative" of another's work, I won't complain about this story, and will leave it up to the Lit community.

You forgot the "ex-husband and new wife take the curtain rods to their new house" part too.

The smell is a plot point that can be replicated in many different ways. Putting rotting seafood in hollow drapery rods, dead fish, I think, in the original, is just plagiarizing nearly the whole story.

Just checked in to see if my story was published yet and saw comment concerns about plot originality. This is just my take on an old apocryphal tale that has always tickled my funny bone. In my real work plagiarism is an important issue. Had I been aware of sbrooks similar story, I would certainly have acknowledged it at beginning or end of my story. . Santee110x

I like inventive, non legal revenge. This is a good one.

She was certainly creative. Nice!

I liked it. 5*

not heard about putting rotting fish in the curtain poles. It's the first thing you'd check when your soon to be ex-wife, as usual wants to rip you off. Ah but in santee's world, all men at dumb idiots.

I loved every word, as they say ' there is more ways than one to skin a cat'. I loved how she did it

Great story. At least she got some evens with the old pervert.

The writer gave too much to the husband in the divorce. And yes, it's going to be great when his new wife decides he's too old to spend time with and moves on. Making him buy a new house for her only to have her cheat on him seems perfect. Exwife and daughters never let him forget his stupidity.

loved it more this time.

Good tale.

got him lol

Love it !!!

Oh god, not the rotting fish in the curtain poles again. FFS is there anyone in the world who doesn't know that trick?

Someone once told me the way to get even with a bank that wouldn't give you a loan was to rent a safe deposit bank then out a nice big fresh fish in it. Then fail to pay for it. It takes a month or so to get an oder to prn it, Just think of the smell! good story

Short and sweet, and nice to see the shoe on the other foot for a change. In other words, a LW story where the LW isn't the cheater. Nice that she got her justice, and second the emotion expressed by Anonymous 7 months ago that the young babe will bleed and then dump the old fool. And the discarded ex won't take him back. And now that it's been revealed this is based on "Ex-wife's Revenge" by sbrooks103x, will have to check that out. 5, y'all.

LOL excellent

Loved it

I hate her. but this is brilliant

cute

Hehe brilliant. Good for her. No clue why some commenters hate the ex wife. Hypocritical much? Somehow it is ok when thr husband cheated and trades in the wife for a newer model? Balderdash.