by Voboy
This was such a great story! I love the characters and the setting. Wonderfully immersive and, of course, arousing. Nice =]
Delightful story! I love historical novels. Perhaps you should consider writing one? Accuracy in terminology and setting, dress, customs, etc are very important, as well as the lust, sex, death, and dress. Good Luck, and keep on!!
Fabulous read! I thouroghly enjoyed the setting, the characters and the story. Well done!
Pro-level writing and storytelling. A very entertaining read. Thanks. 5.
Very well done, old English without the Shakespeare confusing words. Thanks for making this tale and easy fun read. Five stars, and thank you for it.
Very well done. Educational even. It's nice to be educated while I'm jacking off.
"It's nice to be educated while I'm jacking off."
I might use this in my sig. It might be the perfect comment. Thank you!
I have never commented on a story, too shy I guess, but what a good place to change that. Wonderful story with 5 stars from me.
Thanks
Loved the historical setting, 3 kings in a year. I suppose that many of the peasants were simply waiting to see what happened and simply followed the Lord if whatever manor they were part of as there were few freemen around. Thought Merewyn was brilliantly written and wonder if you have any plans to take this further as Bernard and her presumably set up home together. Excellent 5⛤
Brilliant. The story incorporated the history: the mundane reality, the micro economics, the politico-macroeconomics, with what the individual felt of their position in the sphere of existence.
I have a penchant for the feudal/medieval because I live so far below the median 20/21 century norm. I feel every wet leggings pulled on, or not, as a deliberate choice, with cause and effect.
I can't think of anything to say that hasn't already been said above. Your writing skills are absolutely professional quality. This story was better than 99% of historical novels I've read. You've got it, no doubt. Keep writing, it's who you are.