All Comments on 'The Smell of Horse and Leather'

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MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 2 years ago

Incredible. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well Written & better enjoyed...Thank You

JuanaSalsaJuanaSalsaover 2 years ago

This was such a great story! I love the characters and the setting. Wonderfully immersive and, of course, arousing. Nice =]

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Delightful story! I love historical novels. Perhaps you should consider writing one? Accuracy in terminology and setting, dress, customs, etc are very important, as well as the lust, sex, death, and dress. Good Luck, and keep on!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A breath of fresh air. Simply excellent. More please!

Matt696967Matt696967over 2 years ago

Fabulous read! I thouroghly enjoyed the setting, the characters and the story. Well done!

tennesseeredtennesseeredover 2 years ago

Pro-level writing and storytelling. A very entertaining read. Thanks. 5.

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Very well done, old English without the Shakespeare confusing words. Thanks for making this tale and easy fun read. Five stars, and thank you for it.

Blue90aBlue90aover 2 years ago

Fantastic! One of your best

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 2 years ago

Very well done. Educational even. It's nice to be educated while I'm jacking off.

VoboyVoboyover 2 years agoAuthor

"It's nice to be educated while I'm jacking off."

I might use this in my sig. It might be the perfect comment. Thank you!

NEOLSwedeNEOLSwedeover 2 years ago

I have never commented on a story, too shy I guess, but what a good place to change that. Wonderful story with 5 stars from me.

Thanks

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Loved the historical setting, 3 kings in a year. I suppose that many of the peasants were simply waiting to see what happened and simply followed the Lord if whatever manor they were part of as there were few freemen around. Thought Merewyn was brilliantly written and wonder if you have any plans to take this further as Bernard and her presumably set up home together. Excellent 5⛤

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Brilliant. The story incorporated the history: the mundane reality, the micro economics, the politico-macroeconomics, with what the individual felt of their position in the sphere of existence.

I have a penchant for the feudal/medieval because I live so far below the median 20/21 century norm. I feel every wet leggings pulled on, or not, as a deliberate choice, with cause and effect.

elizalooelizalooover 1 year ago

I can't think of anything to say that hasn't already been said above. Your writing skills are absolutely professional quality. This story was better than 99% of historical novels I've read. You've got it, no doubt. Keep writing, it's who you are.

campomancampoman11 months ago

You paint a really good picture!

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All but a few of my stories are linked together; they all take place in a common "universe" that, frankly, I'd love to live in. So any character in any story is, eventually, fair game to have themselves a wild time with any other character. I've gotten a list together that co...