All Comments on 'The Smirk'

Nixrox,agreed. We Scots don't allow a slight go unavenged. It may take a very long time but it will be taken care of.

3 stars - A fairly decent story.

Sicilians are not the only group out there that has a serious streak of revenge in their history.

My Scots ancestors have a long and glorious reputation for holding a grudge long enough to get revenge.

The dog would be dead where I live.

Why did you go off and add the additional kink and ruin the story even worse

My dad always said, "choose your battles wisely... don't sweat the small stuff".

The "Moral High Ground" dear readers, is simply the LAST BASTION for a coward!!

I liked this read. I wish more writers would toughen up some of their characters. Give them the dedication to their family and their way of life as loving, good hearted guys, but when one is so disrespected by their spouse and their new fuck toy, that side of a man that goes to war and spend years fighting and stacking bodies, he introduces that side and no one of it except for the enemies we sent to Allah. Let that type of a man deal with his issues in manner that terrifies those that mistook kindness for weakness, and they just stabbed a grizzly bear with a itty bitty pen knife, and realizes he just got added the menu.

There are a few authors on here that have such skills.

you had to destroy the story at the end didn't you? I refused to continue reading, but did grant you a "1", as it was as low as possible and still register. I won't be wasting any more time.

Nope, not lowering the rating for the 2nd last paragraph still a 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Enjoyed the story, where the pay back was a STD. Got 2 in 1 payback. Nice that Harris, got a beating, never leave home without your Blackbelt. LOL….

Thanks for sharing.

Who is Kate?

Arguably worse than the STD would have been releasing a recording of his fiancee telling her ex how much better and bigger he was in bed. Makes me wonder why she kept dating Jacob. Also, why did her family try to get the MC to reconsider when she apparently didnt skip abeat and kept dating Jacob?

Bella ! 5 Stars

You should have wiped the smirk of her face by telling her you were going to report them for having an out of control dog.

Controlling the Demon! It was hard for me as well. Thanks 5 Big Stars! Buster2U

I gave it 4 stars. I thought the story was pretty good, even if it's been written by many on here. I do like his solution for getting even using an STD, and sending a letter to his ex-wife and their CEO. But the uncle's revenge solution was very good.

lots of twists and an unusual way of getting back at the cheaters. a good story!

I scored it a 5 but never left a comment! Another B&K winner.

Second read: up one star to 4

Femdom agitprop, but Evil on both sides.

Never argue. Or fight, with a fool. Those watching may not be able to tell the difference between the two.

The story was terrific however I am commenting on the last paragraph (last 2 actually lol). The one woman who smirked should one day face a situation like this while you are there & have her not only see how 'difficult' her circumstances are but feel how it is to have someone humiliate her with a smirk. sigh I guess I wish there was justice in the world....yep, right next to world peace lol.

What happened to Sam after that? Actually, the real question is why the F did Sam carry on with Jacob after the divorce? Seems like she was contrite and didn't want the divorce. Not that a reconciliation needed to happen, but details please!

good for you!!!

Must have been written by Kate. No testosterone, just estrogen. No ability to father children from the one who wrote this. Usually a B&K story is worth reading, this wasn't.

The comment below is more or less nonsensical unless the ex wife had zero interest in her marriage, which did not appear to be the case.

Specifically

"Like the one right below. Why would she stay with 5he asshole who broke up her marriage?

Why do people do that all the time?

They fuck up something good...and then feel like they have to show the world they are happy with their choice. If the guy is good looking and makes a lot of money? Says the right things? She figures she'll settle for him."

--- again unless she has zero remorse and did not care for her marriage m, this is highly unlikely. She didn't have feeling for Jacob. He did seduce her. She was lonely but really laments nit having the MC's children, a gear away. She got off on the idea of illicit sex but despite the guy's good looks and charms he is a lousy lay in bed. He doesn't come off as rich though he could financially support her. So yeah her ending up with a seducer when she was desperate to save her marriage and lamented the kids that would never be, conflicts with her getting married to the asshole. She is clearly naive and desperate perhaps. But self validation of her "choice" is a ludicrous rationale. Failed comment.

I finished reading the story, thought 'that's a really good story' then saw the authors' names.

My reaction 'oh, of course'. Another good story from them.

Good story. But meh...the comments some people make.

Like the one right below. Why would she stay with 5he asshole who broke up her marriage?

Why do people do that all the time?

They fuck up something good...and then feel like they have to show the world they are happy with their choice. If the guy is good looking and makes a lot of money? Says the right things? She figures she'll settle for him.

And the comment from the Zues guy below. Doesn't right a God damned thing himself. Yet he's critical of this story.

Obviously this guy has the emotional intelligence of a snail.

Let's see. Fall deeply in love with who you think is the love of your life. Marry her. Devote 7 years of your life to her. Work your ass off for her teying to get promoted so she can be a stay at home mom for your future family. Make all these plans. Then find out she has been stabbing you in the back for a year by having an affair with a total asshole. Then they rub it in your face. Total betrayal.

And you are supposed to what? Shrug your shoulders and say "oh well hope you are happy" and tgen do nothing?

Good lord Zeus...you are the one reading in the LW category. Where the best stories have all kinds of complicated revenge on cheating spouses.

This wasn't that complicated. Get a player to think he seduced a woman except she's a hooker who has an STD.

For a curable STD...and 3 or 4 thousand bucks to a guy most likely making at least a $150k a year? Seems pretty gentle revenge actually. And pretty cheap based on his budget.

He broke up his ex-wife's rebound marriage which was probably bound to happen with the new husband's ways.

And he moves on with life. His stupid ex-wife gets to live with the mess she made of her life. Instead of a marriage to a man who adored her with 3 kids and a happy home in the suburbs? She has 2 failed marriages...knows nothing but heartache and has to live with the sense of loss for years to come.

Pretty damn good story I'd say.

Odd story. It really isn't clear why Samantha stays with the asshole, reconnecting after the divorce. If sex is so laughably unrewarded and the guy seduced you and busted your marriage, then what is the point? As to whynshe cheated? Yeah selfishness, bit of loneliness, and seduction, mixed in with a husband who is overly restrained and quashes his emotions apparently. I agree with Helen. When at the party and he saw the smirk, he should have had it out with his wife. Why wait? But yeah regardless of Samantha being a selfish bitch for having an affair, what could she possibly see in the guy after like the first or second visit? What did he give ger beyond some attention, flirting, and flattery, and yeah some anal sex that she is not really a fan of it sounds like... It doesn't sound like it was money or that she wanted for money or cared about it. It wasn't intimacy or sex. Having an affair because shenwas lonely and lost in her own selfish housewife world is one thing. Not saying excusable but maybe believable. But why continue an affair when the guy sucks in bed compared to her husband? Again what did she get out of it? Besides the guy is such a slime that seems laughable that she would end up marrying thr guy unless she really is that dumb!

Bill, the world is full of self-entitled bitches, men too, who sorely rate a thorough beat down. Really, unless they push into you-gloves off then brother!-they're just not worth the effort. [This from a guy with some anger control problems from dealing with brothers of Islam in Afghanistan; sorta put aside my sanctity of life thing and forgot to completely pick it up. It can be really tough sometimes but gaining back my personal control is a victory I feel great about. Still, threaten me with violence.......bad day for him OR her!

A little easy on the ex

As to the last paragraph, being a piece of shit person is not exclusive to the male of the species, unfortunately.

this is sad. just cause you couldn't handle your marriage, you gave 2 people STDs & wasted hundreads of dollars.

You rating went up as soon as I read it. There are bully's on both male and female side of the coin. That dog owner sounds like a bitch.

You wrote a good and clear story that I really enjoyed. My wife's lover smirked at me and I shoved him through the dining room window in front of the PA state police. I had my lawyer serve her divorce papers before I had him get me out of jail. She begged for a 2nd chance. Now I live alone in the house I owned before we met. Life is good, please yourself as much as you can.

Again for this great story. BillandKate, where are you? I really need a new story from you.

I bet if you took a hammer to that woman’s dog, she would have stopped smirking. Shitty pet owners piss me off.

Like any hike one takes being prepared for anything is a common troupe. Which means you had something in your hands to greet the dog. And the bitch if necessary.

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Self discipline and and resultant situational control is a a salient sign of emotional control. Violence is the first resort of the incompetence.

The Rottweiler? That was an imminent threat to saftey or possible survival.

Had no the owners showed up, and thank God they did,I would have shot the dog.

I had a similar situation, involving a pack of domestic dogs while horse back riding with a lady friend. We had to shoot 6 of 10 animals. Didn't feel great bout it but we really had no choice.

I liked the MC and his solutions set

Good Read!!! Again!;)

Good story. Good ending.

The BTBers are never happy

Flawed internal logic.

What a wimp character. Uncle Vin should have beaten his wimpy cuckold ass just for gp. Oh, there is a big difference between restraint and cowardice, just sayin'.

He should have burned his ex. She deserved to be punished

So Jacob gets to seduce and fuck Sammy and Helen and maybe others, who were also willing participant btw, and Johnny gets to live alone and pay prostitutes for company ….. tell me who is the loser here …. ?

I can’t stand shirkers. This one really didn’t get all he deserved.

Ed

I'm always perplexed by authors who have the cheated-on husband ask "Was he that much better in bed than me?" I mean, what kind of answer does he expect? She'll give the answer that best suits her narrative and he comes across as a loser who's a glutton for punishment. Very odd.

Why the beating at the end. Justice was done without the violence that came way after .

We all react diferently, I shoved my wifes lover out the upstairs window and he was still laying there when the police got there. I did 18 days jail time for simple assault and she was gone with almost everything from MY house. It looked like a Whoville house after the grinch left it, almost nothing left. No regrets. Good story and well presented. My upbringing is the mountians of Pennsylvania, guess we have a strong sense of right and wrong, i naver layed a hand on my wife though.

Jacob got his, and too bad Samantha wouldn't get hers, a disease so severe she greatly physically suffers before casting her chips...

I liked the way revenge was taken, I could see it really happening. Guess that makes me bad, must be my NYC upbringing.

I love the imagination in this story. I've been told the key to winning is control. The best revenge is to maintain your control and help the perpetrators to to self destruct. Then no cops looking for you.

Definitely a five.

Kate should have punched her in the gut and asked her how funny she thought that was.

There are "hundreds" of stories on here where a jilted husband gets revenge on the cheating wife? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

That line alone is the biggest line of fantasy in this story. Maybe a couple of dozen works of husbands get their proper justice.

Good story, nice bit of revenge but a little costly.

Good story. AAAA+++

I was a little confused with this story. When he met Sam at the restaurant for the final meeting it came across as though she regretted her time with Jacob saying that he wasn't as good and that she regretted her mistake almost sounded like she was still in love with Johnny. So why did she then became engaged and marry Jacob? Because it didn't come across that she had any real feelings for Jacob. Something missing in the story?

Nice

In fiction, a little violence is needed. Keeps the pace going. Don't fear about using violence. Remember, it's all pretend anyway. Just a shame the cheating cunt wife didn't suffer more. Oh well.

3 stars - I hate violence of any kind. However, people who do not have 100% control of their dogs in public, should not be very upset when people like me (who have dealt with large dogs their whole life) would not hesitate to kill a dog that attacked like you described. I never walk anywhere without a stout sharpened walking staff and would not think twice about shoving it down the throat of the offending animal.

Thank you Uncle Vin! At least he knew how revenge is suppose to go down!

I've read most of your LW stories and although I've really enjoyed them I find that they don't really have much depth. You never explore why a loving wife would cheat on her husband. It's obviously a paradox a truly loving wife just wouldn't cheat on her husband.

In this story Sam cheats on John with Jacob. From little we know of the character Jacob he really isn't someone a wife would cheat with and yet Sam goes on to marry him after John divorces her. It would really benefit the story if we had had some insight into why Sam cheated. You give a very brief reason for Sam's actions such as him working late etc. But no loving wife is going to cheat on her husband because he's working hard to improve their lives. Makes no sense.

Ok it's just a story but it leaves me wondering why Sam cheated in the first place the story just lacks the detail.

With all that said I've really enjoyed your stories and hope you keep writing despite any comments from the scum trolls that inhabit this website.

Just keep writing great stories like this and I will be happy.

Personally: I have no use for the scum that write the crappy comments. I feel they should write something or shut up they have no taste of sense of write from wrong

I love this story and look forward to more

Charlie

Damn, pretty good - got both with one arrow! 5*

2* Did the authors cut and paste parts from their other stories??? 6 years again? Wimpy cucky husband again. Martian slut ray?

I can only tell you what happened to me in the confronted by a dog sweepstakes. I was coming out of a meeting with some friends and 2 Dobies came thru an open gate in the owners fence. They came at me doing the "I am a vicious Doberman and I'm gonna get cha" bit. Not being particularly afraid of dogs it pissed me off and I started walking toward them doing the "You want some of this? I will kick your little doggie asses into next week. Let's dance" at the top of my voice. I was in the classic attack walk, hands in the aggression position when they came to a screeching halt, gave me the "What the fuck" look and ran back up to their own porch. The owner was apologizing all over when I just walked away saying "stupid, fucking dogs" Got in my car to the jaw-dropped amazement from my friends and drove home. The next time I saw my friends they informed me the dogs were less aggressive since the encounter. Stupid fucking dogs.

Why did you not tell us what happened with the slut wife? Did Vin let her slide?

Great story again

In addition, you have raised an excellent story idea: why not write about a white man / black woman interracial romance (which changes from the eternal and too frequent white woman and the BBC) by evoking all the problems related to this attendance (acceptance, sexuality, racism, prejudices ....)

Thanks for the story. 5⭐

Shoot the dog and the smirking lesbian.

What can I say, the cheating slut got exactly what she deserved. No matter how cold she thought her husband was, cheating was not the answer. She should have confronted him and if the problem could not be resolved, then walk away. To me there is nothing lower than a spouse who cheats and that spouse deserves the worst that the cheated on partner can dish out. In this case the prostitute with Gonorrhea and the pictures that were sent just after the wedding to Sam and to Jacobs employer was karma. Then at the end, the 30th birthday card from Uncle Vin of what happened to Jacob was the frosting on the cake. Well Done 5 stars

In all of your stories you continually misstate one particular phrase: you use "once and a while" when the correct phrase is "once in a while." You are not the only one of Literotica's writers who misuse or misstate the phrase, but you use it more than most of the other writers. Also, the word "conscious" is an adjective and describes a state of awareness; the word "conscience" a noun and is the part of our mind that tells us whether something is acceptable or not. I like your stories but sometimes the misuse of common phrases is a downer.

These stories never seem to get old. BillandKate just do some great stuff.

Some people have no clue how dangerous a mid size dog’s bite infection can be.

No shame to walk away from all these provocations. Write it off as a bad investment and try again. No law suits, no jail time, short time hurt- long time gain.

Been there, got the scars, and later laughed at her pay back.

Good enjoyable short story, wife deserved more punishment

You do not have to Be a Bruce Lee a Chuck Norris or even a Clint Eastwood to Be a Man! He did what needed to be done without Jail time or in anyway Putting Himself in Jeopardy of any kind What was done was like the Kenny Rogers song tells it like it is "You gotta know when to fold them You gotta know when to hold them You have to know when to walk away and You better know when to Run The Only thing that would have Made it better is If He had Met His Ex later after the dust had settled and Told Her what he had done and why it was so easy to show what She had left Him for and Then had His New Wife walk up and Just the Both of them Smile and then walk away Laughing at the Twit Ex Wife.

He comes off as a pussy in the end. 1 star.

The guy dumps his wife because she had sex with another guy. But, he is perfectly happy to have sex and a long-term relationship with a prostitute including after she has sex with the guy who seduced his wife.

You just have to know them. And think like someone who has been completely destroyed by the system. Wonder what I would use? Lets see another woman to seduce one of the women at the end, thus destroying her life. And lets just say a drive by where no cameras are at.

then you'll just have to live with it.

Thanks for the tale!

A person should inflict damage where damage is due and not on ones self.

I gave a rating of 5

Re: the dog

That’s one of the reasons to carry a firearm: protection from the 4-legged creatures as well as the 2-legged versions. (5-stars for the story)

Regarding the dog...

I'd have slowly removed the very sharp knife I carry... and asked the smirking one how funny she'd have found it if I'd been forced to slit her dog's throat...

Might have found the first woman as upset with her friend as you were...

"No photos of them actually fucking, but I'm certain they didn't spend two hours in his townhouse analyzing spreadsheets." As we learned later it wasn't exactly spreadsheets they were analyzing, but there was spreading and sheets and she was getting analyzed. That's batting 1.000 and even even the greatest hitter of all time #9 didn't do that.

"If I cry right now or if I told you about my bad nights, you're bound to tell him one day. Then that arrogant prick will have one more laugh at my expense. Don't push it Sam, you don't want to see the demon that lurks just below the surface." I did it this way in my divorce from my first wife, never thought about like this before but this is one of the smartest things I've ever read in a story on Lit. Or heard in real life for that matter.

"Sam was a fantastic fuck that he couldn't get enough of; and I must have something wrong with my equipment since Sam was so easy to get in his sack when we were married." So why did she have to give up her ass to feel you Jacob? Apparently you had just enough equipment to bang the hell out the sides. Besides that if she was so easy to bed don't you think maybe you aren't the only one she going to be climbing into bed with? The old saying "If they cheat with you, they'll cheat on you." seems to be pretty accurate from what I've experienced.

"Helen was pissed and hell has no fury like a woman scorned." One of my favorite quotes from the Mentalist (If It Bleeds, It Leads) - Patrick Jane: "Hell hath no fury like a slut outflanked."

Great story, it just seems to me that Sam deserved more than a divorce, an annulment and an unsociable disease but I accept that's probably just me feeling a bit romantic. I can understand him just moving on though. Strange to me that she could admit to John that she was stupid for falling for Jacob's line and letting him fuck her then back to him after the divorce. Her lines of reasoning go something like she'll fight the divorce, go back to Jacob after the divorce is final and then marry the guy she had to know would cheat on her. But considering some of the stupids I did years ago it's probably not too far out of the realm of possibilities. Signed: BTW

Another excellent job.

Good story! I know a lot of people with big dogs in my lower income neighborhood. People keep pit bulls and such to feel safe, but everyone is afraid of my daughter’s little terrier (she barks a lot, but is very anxious around strangers).

I loved this story.

But you were well within your rights to kick that dog in the nose.

Those two women are twisted little push-overs. And I mean that literally. If their dog behaves that way, it means that the dog sees itself as the pack's alpha. It does not respect those two women. It may love them, but not respect them. They are his/her subordinates.

I also feel badly because the dog isn't at fault. They were. Dogs are very attuned to an owners hard work at training them. They crave order, structure, and unity.

You should have casually said, "Oh, I understand it's hard to train dogs when you lack confidence is yourself. Maybe you'll get there one day."

Gave her a smug look right back

Then again, don't do that. That's my personality, and I'm VERY difficult to be around. But friends do love when they need someone to be confrontational for them.

I liked the flow of the story and the relevant and sometimes satisfying retribution. I have read other stories with 'infected' prostitutes and I love the idea so I enjoyed that. I also liked the way you treated the rotweiller incident. I love rotweillers especially a very special one by the name of Pandora who is, sadly, no longer with us. I also approved of not hooking up with Helen, another one of Jacob's cast-offs... Jacob got what I consider to be a 'fair treatment' in your story. Overall great read, loved it. Thank You. I gave it 5***** as I enjoyed it a lot.

3 stars

"was hoping you would fight for your wife." - I've said it before. If you have to fight for your wife, you'e already lost.

That meta shit is so needy and self-aggrandizing. If your esteem is so low you need to troll yourself for compliments, please get some help.

Seriously, referring to yourself comes off as desperate and creatively bankrupt.

You know, a swift punch to the nose will back off just about any canine. I once was attacked by a dobie and let him grab my arm inside my jacket. I raised him up and stiff fingered him just below the rib cage and then grasped his snout around my arm and swung him into a telephone pole. He let go. I had some bite marks that broke skin so the dog went to the pound. He didn't make it out.

I loved the story and the part about the dog and the smirk I would have wi-Ed it off her face. But hey I’m Scottish. Keep the stories coming.

You handled it the right way, YOUR way, and you didn't go to jail doing it! Great Story.. and Screw the Haters who rant because you didn't do it their way!

I feel his revenge was better than kicking his ass beside in the end he still got his ass kicked

Since you don’t care what people say or think about you wimp. Wife knew he was a weakling. Lol but the uncle knew how to handle a fool. I hope it never happens but they are both full of dead men bones once I discover it...

Great story, but it would.have been better if he had taken care of black belt himself. Good authors,.Good stories every time.

..the wife didn't make sense. She extolled her husband's sexual prowess and criticized everything about her boyfriend. Then....she marries the turd! Not believable and not explained. This effort strains to get 3*

One big disjoint to this story that made it a 4*.... She tells Johnny, "He couldn't hold a candle to your love making. I never had to fake it with you, every time you shoved that fat salami in me I orgasmed."

But yet she still marries mini-dick Jacob that requires fake orgasms ???

A wife that marries a little dick turd she cheated on her loving husband with must have had loving feelings for him and deserves to be "punished" also, even if Uncle Vic had to do it. She did the ultimate smirk and walks with a shot of penicillin. Not the Sicilian way, man!

I ‘score’ LE stories based upon the quality of the writing - not upon what occurs in the story - so, here, the ‘5’ is for your well written story. The ‘word’ I wish to add *is* about what occurs in the story... it troubles me to have the cheating spouse reveal that the person they cheated with was a choice of convenience and ‘just sex’ or ‘not making love, but a fun/different fuck,’ or recognized to be an opportunistic seducer - AND THEN MARRIES the non-romantic clown. That consequence just doesn’t make sense.

Just wanted to make that comment.

Cheers,

JMAS

A round of applause for the protagonist for the clap his wife's lover got!