All Comments on 'The Sniffer Pt. 01'

by elrayo41

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very Good!!

You have my interest. Bring on part two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I agree......

You have my interest for now.....bring on chapter 2

motordaddymotordaddyabout 9 years ago
YOU HAVE IT

STARTED NOW TELL US MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Lisa has opened up a real opportunity here and Tom and her brother can help her get off in more ways !! You should describe Lisa in more detail as well as the boys........ this could get very interesting !! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please!!!!

Looking forward to Ch 2.

Slithy2013Slithy2013about 9 years ago
More Lisa & Tom

Please carry on with Lisa & tom & leave your stepmother for chapter 3.

marknmaggiemaemarknmaggiemaeabout 9 years ago
great start

agree withlast comment continue with main do not care about stepmother atthis time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice start

continue ASAP

Trailrider13Trailrider13over 8 years ago
More

Your statement is that you will continue, depending on comments. Well several commented and it has been 10 months with no more.

daganetdaganetover 1 year ago

My God, that was awesome! Please continue!

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