All Comments on 'The Softest Heart'

way to unrealistic for me no way would he keep loving her after she eloped that would have been the end he would have avoided and ignored her for the rest of his life stop rewritting human nature and keep it believable and realistic if you want to write a fantacy put it in that area not here fiction needs to be realistic and believable and within the boundries of human nature

Don't listen to the comments from idiots who can't even spell...this is a great story. It's sweet, sexy, and sad all at the same time. The other person who commented is wrong, it's totally believable, of course he'd still love her after she eloped...he's in love (real love, not lust!) with her.

I hope you'll write more with these characters. Make it a series!

xoxox

A sister in the US

Hoping for more chapters, love it so far.

"F" mister anon/unrealistic!

When you are in love like this, human nature is a wonder to behold! I hope to see the naxt chapter! The detail you had in your descriptions was fantastic!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

This is a difficult subject to write about convincingly, but your story had the ring of verisimilitude. I found that could believe their relationship, their emotional connection, and their dialogue. Very well done.

to bad there is only one honest opinion and alot of kissass onesdon't trash bad commentors they have just as much right as you kiss assers do and they are usually more honest keep comments to the story only please

if he loved her and she eloped he would not want anything to do with her. if he visited her and she acted the way you describe in the begining he would tell her "when she came to her senses to let him know until then he would have no contact with her again" she killed all love when she eloped. we need more honest opinions stop paying people to give rave reviews.

no way he would ever visit her if he had loved her it would be too painful. he would have ignored and avoided her from the time she eloped, KEEP IT BELIEVABLE PLEASE.

good story please make more to this.

Their situation truly was heart-breaking. I understand perfectly why Dom could not let her go when she eloped with Mike. Dom has absolutely no respect for Mike (and with good reason!), and as time passes, neither does Juliet. Juliet & Dom's love is deep, strong, genuine. Wrong on two major counts (adultery and incest), but nevertheless deep, strong, and genuine. It's very significant that Juliet & Mike never did really love each other; originally, sex was the only thing they had in common. But she & Dom loved each other at a very deep level,and with her marriage in tatters it's entirely credible that she needed Dom in her life. Like some others here, I'd like to read more about these characters at some point.

Fingermeister

love to read more of this. it could get really hot if they lived together

Places to go with this one...hope you do!

We need another chapter!