All Comments on 'The Soldier's Wife'

Nothing wrong with that. Some people can, some people can't. You're probably really good at other stuff. I've read three. I think that's enough.

This would.make a great tv show. Check with NetFlix, or maybe HBO. The Sopranos are back. Good story , with no bloodshed . Yet.

I almost didn't read this when I saw the "blackmailed for sex" description, but based on your earlier stories I thought it was worth a look. It was a good thing I did, because you sunk the old blackmail schtick in the river with a set of cement overshoes.

Many stories irritated me by how easily blackmailed women could be, when there were obviously better solutions to their problems. This story eases that irritation in a refreshingly entertaining manner and is a winner for me.

this is a site for stories that has sex in them, if she is going to be blackmailed then needed to fit or else it makes you look stupid for writting this piece of crap.

should have better control of their assets, TK U MLJ LV NV

I like the story, like the twist. But your little honey needs to get her shit wired straight as far as working conditions for women in this country by state, which includes among many other things strength of sexual harrasment laws, frequency of complaints, and rate of prosecutions for complaints. California is in the top half, about 3 spots below Jersey, and the top half is almost entirely blue states, with 20 of the bottom 21 worst states for women to work in all being red states. Maybe us in Cali aren't so fucking stupid after all.

You’re obviously very talented, I liked the change in prospective. Together with the humorous aspect, I thought it worked really well. Looking forward to reading more from you..thanks again.

Bada bing! I loved the twist, with Angela extorting the blackmailers. It was exactly the kind of thing a made man's wife would do (at least according to the Sopranos!).

Being from Jersey, I had a feeling something was up when I saw she had an uncle Paulie help get her a job. Loved it! Bada Bing Bada Boom!

Keep up the good work.

I too thought from the description that this was the same tired old blackmailed wife plot, but read on cause I liked what you did with “With Malice Aforethought”. I’m still smiling. Angela’s got sand. I’ll go back to my comments from your first story, invoking Clint Eastwood’s line from “Grand Torino”: “Ever notice how you come across someone every once in a while who you shouldn’t have fucked with?”

Thanks again. That was fun.*****

You got me!

I thought it was gong to be the usual wife falls for the blackmail story, along with the dumb bimbo who THINKS she smart, while she seems so dumb.

Then it turns out that she's NOT so dumb, and I liked the she told her husband up front. Even if he WASN'T a made man, not giving into the blackmail is always the right thing to do. You obviously can't trust blackmailers to keep their word, or to not use what you just did to further blackmail you.

While it didn't cause me to hesitate reading, I WAS fooled by the description in that she actually WASN'T blackmailed!

Short, sweet and to the point.

Loved it, anyone who doesn't love this is a dickless wonder.

5/5

Simplistic and cartoonish, but it rates well just because it turns the tired stupid blackmail plot device upside down. I think she let them off too easy. I was going to propose that part of her pay back would be to make the two fools suck each others dicks, but then I remembered they are from California.

When they show up with the money, Vince should have the DA there waiting to arrest them.

hell yeah. can you add another chapter to this?

Dosen't take any shit from anyone. She is not as scatterbrained as she might appear. Sharp young lady with a husband that can protect her if necessary but she seems to be able to do it on her own. Liked the story and they perspective.

Thanks for the hard work. Looking forward to more of your work.

Woodmanone

is an idiot. The story is funny, creative, and well enough done mechanically. Don't let the idiots discourage you. I think most readers will chuckle over this one.

If they dont have the guts to leave their name, Shove their comments in the trash. I happen to like the 3 out of 3 stories you've written. Keep going.

so they're almost ny tough....almost.

but that's like....100 times more tough than some sun-burnt cali cuck. and mayyybe the occasional mountain man growing pot in north cali.

the only tough thing in cali is the mexican population, cuz they're not beta bitches.

this was funny. and maybe the anon below doesn't like your writing cuz it's east coast style? idk. i liked it. you do you.

Great new spin.

Ignore the criticism, keep on writing.

You rock!

Jersey mobster wife scores over two dumb ass holes. But both deserve a beating or jail.

Have someone copy edit your pieces. Enjoyed it, nonetheless.

Vince might take the money, but he for sure won't take the disrespect! Those two clowns better be running by the time Angela gets to Angelo's.... ;-)

LMAO with this one -- nice job. Quite a shift from your other (dark) tales. Thanks for contributing here.

You from Jersey - I'm from Jersey (what was that TV skit?) - great little story!

Okay, okay, I didn’t see that coming. I do love a big plot surprise and that was a good one. It would be fun to see her pop up again in a story. A big Five for something new and refreshing. Say hello to Big Paulie for me.

I didn't see that coming. Still chuckling.

Wait ‘til Sweetie and Hubby go vacation in DeGarde, LA. JimBob’s swamp, doncha know!

5*

Love it. 😂🤣😂

I loved it!

Yeah, I almost didn't read this, I thought it was your typical blackmail scenario. But am I glad I read this story. Wonderful, Funny and Entertaining. I wish it was longer. It reminded me of a story called "BAM" with a similar scenario.

Thank you for a funny story....That I enjoyed.

Is this Dr Seuss? This is supposed to be a site for SEX stories -- not Walt Disney bullshit.

Epic x cultural humor.

And I am a proud Californian!!😛

Really I figured out what kind soldier he was, before she drew pictures. Nice creativity.

But she can't be that bright if she thinks she has to stay pure for her husband while acknowledging he cheated on her. Dumb mafia bimbo.

Go ahead, pull your pud.

Yeah, just yeah.

Full boats, 5*

These two morons need to pay greatly for their attempted blackmail.They have obviously worked this scam elsewhere.

Well, you got my 5. That was great. LOL.

Thanks for submitting.

Fucking loved it!

I don’t understand why this isn’t rated higher. It’s a five to me. Like another commentator, I almost didn’t read it based on the single line trailer.

Maybe that’s it.

Loved our Joysey Goyl! Unfortunately, not every married lady who faces these unending iterations of predation has a capo hubby Vince! Nor every unmarried one, a capo famiglia Uncle Paulie! More's the pity!

Short fun humorous read. Nice creativity.

5-stars

Creative. Not the usual LW cuck/fag crap

finally a real loving wife who respects her husband

so rare in todays society where half the women have no respect for their man just as half of the men are also cheating scum with no respect for their wives

thank you for giving me hope

5* 100 hardons and a tingling feeling in my balls

Somehow, you captured the 'Joisey' thing perfectly. (Of course, those of us who live in NJ know that the stereotype is nonsense, but what the heck...if it works for you, run with it, right?)

Let me be among the legions who will likely congratulate you for your ingenuity and originality. You bring a desperately needed breath of fresh air to LW, TRYTSTYN.

Bravo.

Finally, two greaseballs make the wrong move on the wrong woman!

Different angle, same great story.

I can't tell you just how much I relate to this. Hahaha

Fun story could of been 5 Star of it went into what Vince did.

Again, I had forgotten how good this was.

Loved the play on "soldier". She made them an offer they "shouldn't" refuse.

Great , and thanks.

fantastic twist , loved it

I love this author

Great story!

5

This author is the best at this type of story 5 stars never does him justice

Vince needs to send that CA company a message, Jersey style, sending their two new euniches back!

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+5*, Hooyah, salutes....

Top of his class with this type of story 5*

The forgiveness fappers must hate you.

Short, Sweet & Love It !

THANKS !

Love her,Love the story 😊

I just have to read the rest of this authors work, fucking brilliant!! Even if she wasn't married to a made man, pushing back in these contrived situations would totally derail shit plot lines like this.

The 5-point scale is way too low for this one.

Thanks!

You can read this author's stories time and again and never tire of them

Good stuff. Coukd have been a bluff. Coukd have been real. The line about letting Vince get some on the side and her not disrespecting him suggests the latter. As well as her dad being in for a bum federal rap. Creative.

good one

Married to the mob. Great story.

For those of you wondering about Angela letting Vince screw around there was a nice Italian gentleman an old friend told me about in his neighborhood with the nick name "Two Balls" because he moved his girlfriend in the house with his wife. Not sure if it was because he had two women or he just had the balls to do it

He disappeared a few years later but I understand that was business and nothing to do with his living arrangements

I can't help but love this one. 5* and thanks for the laugh!

P.S. TRYTSYN. I married a princess. She's cute, sexy and a little over five foot nothing but petite.

She's generous and a fantastic wife but her nice girl image disappears when someone really crosses her.

She was married before and her then husband tried to disrespect her by moving his mistress into their home.

The divorce was immediate and very one sided in her favor. He was desperate to get her back though and didn't take a hint.

He mysteriously moved to the other side of the country and died for some reason. LoL!

Have a good year my friend.

loved it!

I feel bad that she didn't set Vince on them to end their career. Permanent-like.