by mack_the_knife
Mack!
This is developing into a quite well developed story, keep at it! I enjoy it
John
I'm a big fan of well written fantasy and I count this amoung the few that I've found here.
I've almost run out of praise worthy comments for your immensely enjoyable writing. Keep it up!
(I guess Literotica didn't like my little hearts and cut my comment short... )
... love, love, love, love the attention to detail, the development of plot and characters, and the perfectly inserted erotica in just the right amounts. SA has now moved into my top three faves! Damn it, it's 4:41am with so many more chapters to go and my panties already soaked. I may have to skim/skip the erotica to reach the ending!