All Comments on 'The Song of Roland Ch. 23'

I'm always glad for a new chapter.

Harlan Ellison once wrote about how when you read a good author, you can "hear the music" in their writing, regardless of the genre of the piece. With your work sir, I can most definitely hear the music. I don't know if you are a name already in the published sci fi/fantasy world who is just "slumming", writing something a lot harder core from a sexual perspective than the popular market will bear; or if you are still feeling your way , but your work is excellent, with complex characters and motivations, clear and engaging action scenes, and especially in the latest arc, vibrant and imaginative world building. I hope if you are unpublished, that that changes for you soon,as you have a voice worth being represented in the sci fi/fantasy community.

I find myself at a loss of words. Your writing is worthy of praise I know not how to express. I imagine the next chapter/s will take some time to complete, I shall enjoy your new series in the mean time.

You've spun an enchanting tale and I'm hooked. Please don't stop!

Been a while since you posted, but I found this picture https://i.imgur.com/E49RKSN.jpg and I immediately thought of your story. Cheers to you.

I realize that this is when it gets hardest but please continue. Long or short does not matter but the story has come so far that it should not die now. CONTINUE PLEASE

The story. Would hate to see this story just fade away and never be completed.

Quite an interesting and well-written story! Thanks for sharing.

I really love the complexity of this story. From a simple beginning it has developed into a powerful psychological tale of fear and hope, purity and corruption, and with a mystical over shadowing that makes me wonder what role the gods of this world are playing behind the scenes. Truly a masterpiece of intriguing writing that I hope is finished.