All Comments on 'The Sorcerer's Bride Ch. 02'

Wow, what a great start on Literotica. Thanks for the story, and please keep the tale going. It's interesting, and sexy!

I really like the way you go back and forth in perspective of the two characters from one paragraph to the next. It is a very effective way of letting us know how it feels for each of them, and it creates a nice pacing to the story. I also love how this story is about genuine feelings between the two lovers, and not just sex or lust.

I haven't read chapter one yet and I just decided to peek at this to see what it was about as I love the 'old world' type romances of castles, and medieval times. I wonder what is in store for these characters as you have them so richly developed and so sexy. A very hot romance, and yet it has a certain suspense to it as well! GREAT job!! I am going to find chapter one now!

10plus...and i agree please keep this one going and what a wonderful beginning for you as a author in literotica...your fans are growing quickly. i do so hope to hear more from you either with something new...or hopefully more on this story...fighting the evil villians, her getting kidnapped from him...fighting to get her and his unborn child back..the death of her mentor being revealed as a falsehood and he is alive? so many possiblitys with this one...got to love it. Thank you for sharing. respectfully a fan in texas

You are a fantastic writer. I love this story line and hope there's more to come.

Good story so far.