All Comments on 'The Soul Refiner Bk. 01 Ch. 22-24'

I really like this story! I'm very interested how the story continues!

Love the story. And especially how she seems to love & take comfort from him exercising control over her.

Like that last passage, where she seems happy to endure the operation that needs to be performed as long as he is there taking control. Like she clings to him as reassurance everything will be okay. It’s romantic how much she trusts him & desires his control.

Thanks! I’ve written (though not edited) out to chapter 45 at this point. So I should be posting at least that far. 45 is roughly 3/4 of the planned length for book 1.

@Anon I’m glad it’s coming across that way. I wanted book one to focus on Myta and Esur, having a very focused relationship on the D/s aspect of BDSM.

There’s some other light play to accompany it, obviously. But that’s where they live.