All Comments on 'The Sound of a Heartbeat'

Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

To have a mature lady muse, has always been a deep dream of mine. I love the fact that, she enjoys the love and sensuality of her young lover,especially his exploration of her lovely ass and the smell/taste of it - as they enjoy the pleasures of sex. I wish I had a woman like that. Well written ! Reading this story, have ignited my desires once more!

Very good story, thanks

Excellent. This is first-class story telling, not just a bunch of four letter words. You have shown us exactly how Claire? feels and her deepening need to be with Trevelian. He is obviously an alpha male, unlike her husband, and the climax, (pun intended) leaves us expecting/wanting more of this story. Thank you for a tale well told; well worth all five stars, more if they were available.

Great build-up

Really enjoyed this - gave it five stars. I especially loved the character development of the protagonist and the super hot sex descriptions/scenes. The only comment, and I hope it's not a negative critique, is that the morning with Trev ended too abruptly. I'd like.d to have read about the aftermath of their love making- their cuddles, comments, thoughts. You write so well with such descriptions and emotion, I'd like to read what goes on with these two = I guess it just forces me to read ALL of your stories. Thanks