All Comments on 'The Sound of Submission Pt. 02'

Great story and well written. Mateo's reaction was expected and hypocritical at the same time. He may not be quite the sadist like Thad but enjoys the same things. I'm assuming he is still domming Alice but thinking about his own sister being treated the same sets him off. Wait until he has to explain how he knows these things about Thad to Elena. Alice is now between a rock and hard place, her boyfriend?/Dom and her boss/best friend. Not to forget Elena who just found out the man she is interested in wasn't what she expected and how is she going to deal with it. Thad, can a leopard changes his spots? Not likely. Can't wait to read more.

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Cheers

I am HOOKED! I hope you continue this more than 3 parts!

An excellent chapter; thank you for sharing this. Really enjoying the story.

5* Jules.