All Comments on 'The Southern Bell'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A wining Halloween story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sorry ghosts just do not do it for me no matter how noble [or ignoble] the cause. Too many Friday 13th's and chainsaws. So cannot score you, you write well though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very seldom do I comment on stories.

This story deserves one. Bravo and well done.

Maybe a follow up?

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 1 year ago

Good story, but unless I missed something, shouldn’t it have been “Belle” not Bell?

G5902G5902over 1 year ago

WOW WOW WOW!!! I love this story! I enjoyed the pace and the smooth almost poetic rhythm of this story and what a great story!!! Now, how to mark this as my all time favorite story!? Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!!

Davester37Davester37over 1 year ago

This is a wonderful story, and I enjoyed reading it. It could have used another reading to catch the remaining typos, but those few didn’t slow me down too much.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

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I love writing stories and have realized that I like to write about loving harems and sex. So I went WILD with it. Please see my Patreon for current progress on Jaina the sex slave and some one-off short sex scenes. https://www.patreon.com/omnierotica You can see some artwo...