by omniv
Sorry ghosts just do not do it for me no matter how noble [or ignoble] the cause. Too many Friday 13th's and chainsaws. So cannot score you, you write well though.
Very seldom do I comment on stories.
This story deserves one. Bravo and well done.
Maybe a follow up?
Good story, but unless I missed something, shouldn’t it have been “Belle” not Bell?
WOW WOW WOW!!! I love this story! I enjoyed the pace and the smooth almost poetic rhythm of this story and what a great story!!! Now, how to mark this as my all time favorite story!? Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!!
This is a wonderful story, and I enjoyed reading it. It could have used another reading to catch the remaining typos, but those few didn’t slow me down too much.
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.