All Comments on 'The Spanked Step-Sister Pt. 01'

A waste of time. Maybe you should write short stories for school children instead.

This is not a story but just a preview. Way too short with nothing happening.

Sorry, sp9983, I'm just starting out and I'm still learning! :(

I broke this story down into small parts, so the really hot stuff is coming. :)

I don't think school children would like my short stories ;) I promise, these are for adults!!!! But I hear you: MORE HOT STUFF!!!! Thank you for the feedback!

I think it's a good beginning. You've managed to capture a pretty fun narrative voice. The only problem is that it's too short and stops too soon—it will be interesting to see if it holds up (and starts living up to its title) once the next few chapters are out.

Im a school child and I love it already :)