by sajukno
Wow, wonder what happens when a guy gets pulled over... Lol. Whew!
"ponytail, her heaving breasts bulging out..."
The cop didn't sprint up to the car, so she wasn't out of breath, so it makes no sense that her breasts would be heaving.
'heaving breasts' is a classic porn description; did you just have an overwhelming urge to use it since you were writing porn?
Also you describe the cop's cock as softening after the first fuck, the instantly she's hard enough to stick it in Candy's tight ass; tell me, how does that work?
Both issues are just laziness, first not willing to learn what words mean and then not wanting to write another 2-3 sentences getting the cop hard enough to fuck. Hell, it would have only taken one. ie: 'The viagra Officer Moody was slipped by her fellow cops was really kicking in, fucking Candy's pussy only made it harder.'