All Comments on 'The Spider Pt. 03'

Different

I'm lost. -_-

Very well done story. You have created a terrific protagonist and antagonist and they are circling each other.

Interesting that Spider has no compunctions about hurting people to get what she wants, in this case information about Just John.

Did Spider make a big mistake in leaving her senses open at the end of this chapter?

Very intriguing story that is well written and thought out. Makes you want to keep reading.

Actually, I suspect that leaving herself open and masturbating has a lot to do with the forgotten part of their phone conversation from last chapter. I also imagine she's touching herself in time with the beat.

Story is very intriguing so far, but the end of this part seems a bit out of place.

Next chapter will be up shortly!