by Andrew1968
A long story, perhaps a little too long. Nonetheless I was going to rate this as 5 star until I read the "Epilogue" at which point the whole thing crashed with an ending more appropriate to a ghost story. And, if the final chapter was 'years later', what happened to the children Tim and Helen in particular, were going to try so hard to have or were the two women barren ?
totally unique and hot. I wished you included more description of how she was controlling, e.g. his bank account, his email, maybe take his keys away so he can't leave, etc.