All Comments on 'The Spoils of War Ch. 01'

Dark and hot, but I was expecting something else based on where it was published. You have painted a compelling picture with your words, not something everybody can do well, thank you for sharing.

Jackie

She seems nice. I do hope things work out well for her.

I agree should be non con. Or re-write with more BDSM scenes to it. Over all good start for your first try.

Love to story line.

Too dark and depressing, it’s not BDSM either. Thanks but no thanks.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

Great start. Setting the scene. Im invested.

Tess-it’s called chapter 1 for a reason.

Wonderfully Gorean, but even more intense. Too many writers in this genre do not realize the intense humiliation of a complete haircut. Will now ration the story and read chapter two tomorrow.