All Comments on 'The Squeeze'

Nicely written alternative take to a recent too common theme. Very good first story.

Please tell me there is more to this story? I am hoping there is a way they will be together again and the world will be cured so they can be free to make babies.

Super accurate on how crooked the government is. Made the story way more believed.

Too much on the sex and not enough background

It could end where it is but I hope there will be a Part Two.

I really liked the set up ... very plausible. Is there a Ch 2 in the works? I hope so. The sex was pretty hot, too.

Promising...

Intriguing story that required some good innovation, but the ending was abrupt and sad. Your story to write, though. I just prefer a happy ending, or at least one that gives some closure. Maybe you're setting it up for future chapters where they struggle against the V-squad. In case that's the intent, I will "favorite" you as an author so I'll be notified if future chapters.

do not like sad stories as such as the world we live in is going nuts. people if the could only know where we are headed call me a nut ok but when it does remember this

Tender love story

Excellent story! I love sci fi and post apolyptic stories. This combined elements of both. The bro/sis sex was good. You left it hanging for another chapter or 5. Hope the next comes quickly.

4 stars

DragonRider55

Fantastic story, great imagination. I sincerely hope there is another chapter or two in the works. This story could be greater. 5/5

For those asking if there is more to this story, the answer is an emphatic yes. I have a rough story arc for Gwen and Lance as well as other characters you will meet in later chapters.

This story has been rattling around in my head for over a year now. It has evolved to its current incarnation in just the past few weeks.

Thank you for your encouraging comments. I hope to continue to entertain you in the future.